好大氣的英 =》漢 的歌詞 - I Surrender/沒離開過

在“我是歌手”第五期，第一個出場的林誌炫唱的歌是“沒有離開”。沒聽過這個歌名，見是Celine Dion 原唱，想必不凡。看著字幕裏的歌詞，被打動了。
 
歌詞作者沒有翻譯原作，而是用自己的話把好多好多人生，命運，愛情詩裏的精華摘來，寫進了歌詞。我把英文歌詞拿來，比較。中文版的歌詞內涵的大氣是原文無法比的。

 I Surrender – 沒離開過
 
There's so much life I've left to live
And this fire is burning still
When I watch you look at me
I think I could find the will
To stand for every dream
And forsake this solid ground
And give up this fear within
Of what would happen if they ever knew
I'm in love with you

我曾愛過也失去過
嚐過愛的甜與澀
擺脫命運的捉弄
我知道我要什麽
有一份難言的感動
用所有情緒揉合
何必再無謂的思索
這世界有什麽好值得
如果沒有你

'Cause I'd surrender everything
To feel the chance to live again
I reach to you
I know you can feel it too
We'd make it through
A thousand dreams I still believe
I'd make you give them all to me
I'd hold you in my arms and never let go
I surrender

我眺望遠方的山峰
卻錯過轉彎的路口
驀然回首
才發現你在等我沒離開過
我尋找大海的盡頭
卻忽略蜿蜒的河流
當我逆水行舟
你在我左右
推著我走

I know I can't survive
Another night away from you
You're the reason I go on
And now I need to live the truth
Right now, there's no better time
From this fear I will break free
And I'll live again with love
And no they can't take that away from me
And they will see...

I know 我太富有
因為愛滿足了所有
生命中每個漏洞
你都用真心補縫
right now 就從這一刻
我要擁你在懷中
給你加倍的溫柔
為你唱一首專屬的情歌
請聽我說

I'd surrender everything
To feel the chance to live again
I reach to you
I know you can feel it too
We'd make it through
A thousand dreams I still believe
I'd make you give them all to me
I'd hold you in my arms and never let go
I surrender

我眺望遠方的山峰
卻錯過轉彎的路口
驀然回首
才發現你在等我沒離開過
我尋找大海的盡頭
卻忽略蜿蜒的河流
當我逆水行舟
你在我左右
推著我走

Every night's getting longer
And this fire is getting stronger, baby
I'll swallow my pride and I'll be alive
Can't you hear my call
I surrender all

喜怒哀樂捆綁我的
都不再算什麽baby
讓我的世界以你為軸
快樂你快樂
憂愁你憂愁

I'd surrender everything
To feel the chance to live again
I reach to you
I know you can feel it too
We'll make it through
A thousand dreams I still believe
I'll make you give them all to me
I'll hold you in my arms and never let go
I surrender

我眺望遠方的山峰
卻錯過轉彎的路口
驀然回首
才發現你在等我沒離開過
我尋找大海的盡頭
卻忽略蜿蜒的河流
當我逆水行舟
你在我左右
陪著我走

Right here, right now
I give my life to live again
I'll break free, take me
My everything, I surrender all to you

right here right now
讓我們一起抬起頭
迎接愛降落
陽光證明這並不是一場夢

Right now
I give my life to live again
I'll break free, take me
My everything, I surrender all to you

right now
閉上眼用心去感受
有一個聲音
它說愛情沒離開過