賀知章《回鄉偶書·其二》英文版

《回鄉偶書·其二》
A pair of back hometown notes. No. 2

作者：賀知章
He Zhi-Zhang

英文翻譯：忒綠


離別家鄉歲月多
Parted from my hometown for donkey’s years

近來人事半消磨
Everything from ever before is now a far cry

惟有門前鏡湖水
Only water of Lake Mirror afore the house

春風不改舊時波
ripples in spring breeze as an old buck of mine

 

 

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• 美風版主及網親們周末愉快、感恩節周愉快！ -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 14:03:00

• 繼續沿襲唐詩原作和其一翻譯的親民近白話風格。請網親們多批評指正。 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 14:06:00

• Okra,期待你的意境飛揚風格的翻譯 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 14:08:00

• 牆裂推薦移兄的haiku. Couldn’t be better... -Okra- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:20:58

• Year fly, man cry, water in July, look, wrinkles on mine -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 14:53:43

• very cool -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 15:11:00

• Sounds -Okra- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 18:50:19

• 好棒的 haiku! -Okra- ♀ (162 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 18:57:32

• はいく俳句 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:19:00

• post yours, buddy -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:20:00

• 被逼梁山，硬湊一曲… -Okra- ♀ (342 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 20:14:40

• so good. Amazing -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 20:51:00

• 把你和花董的結合起來： -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 21:12:00

• Home far away, years fly -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 21:13:00

• Moppet now grandam, I cry -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 21:15:00

• Front lake rippling in April wind -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 21:16:00

• As the same as a wrinkled face, oh my -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 21:16:00

• Perfect! I like it best! -Okra- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 22:15:38

• 追逐你其一的風格 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/21/2020 postreply 07:51:00

• Far cry 是一個俗語，是to be completely different from something 大相徑庭、相去 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:30:00

• 例：This flat is a far cry from the house they had before.這公寓與以前的房 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:32:00

• 子相去甚遠 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:32:00

• 常作名詞用 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:33:00

• 多謝介紹far cry……不好意思，我原意動的是移花接木兄的cheese. -Okra- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 20:06:10

• 喜歡你的ID，忒太妙了， 前一陣綠這個字被笑壇玩瘋了，岸似綠 岸似透綠 岸似透黛綠 -移花接木- ♂ (29 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 14:56:41

• 這是十幾年前起的一個文城博客名字，還有個故事... -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 15:22:00

• 哈哈，為什麽用donkey‘s years？看到花董的詩，樂S了：）別忘了準備朗誦和配音來參加活動哈：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 15:10:17

• 美風小主好。中文裏的鯉魚“猴年馬月”，是不是與此沾邊啊 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 15:17:00

• 猴年，馬月貌似每個黃道輪回還能再見一次，驢年得等到地老天荒了 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 15:22:49

• donkey‘s year真是有出處啊，學習了：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 16:04:51

• The phrase “donkey’s years,” meaning a long time, originated in -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 19:28:00

• the early 20th century, apparently as a pun on the long ears of -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 19:31:00

• 汗！！！ ear -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 19:45:10

• 就像土味情話：“什麽的year最長呀？” “驢的ears”. long ears = long years. -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 19:57:00

• 詩翻譯得真好，又學了不少：）前一段剛學的ripple，這麽快就重逢了：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 15:11:41

• 末句改成這樣是不是更好一些：ripples in spring breeze as old time coming by -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 15:21:00

• 韻腳更清晰了 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 15:38:29

• 挺好的：）對英文詩不懂，是每句話都需要押韻嗎？ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 15:42:38

• 我覺得每個隔一句押韻，挺妙的 -移花接木- ♂ (156 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 15:50:32

• 奧，居然這麽押韻啊，學習了。第一次看這個帖呢：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (101 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 16:03:03

• 我在這裏轉帖的那首詩是每緊挨兩句完全押韻，但整篇都半押韻 -移花接木- ♂ (1358 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 18:39:42

• 網上找的普希金的英文詩，韻腳有規律嗎？ -beautifulwind- ♀ (837 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 21:28:01

• 現代詩很多不用押韻的吧，我在笑壇也見過很多不押韻的中文詩歌 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 21:44:42

• 花董移花接木的本事了得，一個故事裏辣麽多木辣麽多花，獨一無二的故事，讚 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 16:13:00

• 不過是偷梁換柱，算不得真本事， 你才真厲害 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 18:41:27

• love the poem! -小公主- ♀ (21 bytes) () 11/19/2020 postreply 18:03:29

• 恭喜忒綠。首頁進來，謝謝網管，賀知章“回鄉偶書之二” 英文版掛首成功：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 14:39:31

• 謝謝版主和網管！ -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 17:17:00

• 讚讚 -xiaoruo- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/21/2020 postreply 16:08:48