好棒的 haiku!

還是忍不住指手劃腳：可不可以把cry 換成whine? 
如果覺得我吹毛求疵的話，請狠狠踢我一????……

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• はいく俳句 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:19:00

• post yours, buddy -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:20:00

• 被逼梁山，硬湊一曲… -Okra- ♀ (342 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 20:14:40

• so good. Amazing -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 20:51:00

• 把你和花董的結合起來： -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 21:12:00

• Home far away, years fly -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 21:13:00

• Moppet now grandam, I cry -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 21:15:00

• Front lake rippling in April wind -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 21:16:00

• As the same as a wrinkled face, oh my -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 21:16:00

• Perfect! I like it best! -Okra- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 22:15:38

• 追逐你其一的風格 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/21/2020 postreply 07:51:00

• Far cry 是一個俗語，是to be completely different from something 大相徑庭、相去 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:30:00

• 例：This flat is a far cry from the house they had before.這公寓與以前的房 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:32:00

• 子相去甚遠 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:32:00

• 常作名詞用 -忒綠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 19:33:00

• 多謝介紹far cry……不好意思，我原意動的是移花接木兄的cheese. -Okra- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/20/2020 postreply 20:06:10