My version

美酒飲教微醉後，好花看到半開時

A man knows a wine only at tipsy;
A flower becomes a true beauty only at half-blooming.

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• 好！ -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 06:15:01

• Nice ... -Lucidus- ♂ (575 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 06:18:35

• good -hammerheadshark- ♀ (1015 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 06:43:18

• :) Say it without saying it. -hammerheadshark- ♀ (91 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 06:47:08

• My new version -聚曦亭- ♀ (614 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 07:42:23

• Sorry, 應該是syllables -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 07:43:27

• Yes, polish it. -hammerheadshark- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 07:57:16

• 有點那個... -聚曦亭- ♀ (1263 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 09:19:01

• Hope this will clarify -hammerheadshark- ♀ (749 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 09:32:17

• And it will improve your version if you change "a man" into "one -聚曦亭- ♀ (68 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:18:15

• Some words got cut off. So here is the complete comment: -聚曦亭- ♀ (198 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:21:30

• I really don't see the difference. -hammerheadshark- ♀ (220 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:28:55

• Yes, it would be a big improvement! -聚曦亭- ♀ (711 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:43:52

• I thought you'd go there -hammerheadshark- ♀ (245 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 13:31:36

• No, it doesn't. -SanGabriel- ♀ (642 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:23:39

• As I said -hammerheadshark- ♀ (220 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:33:53

• But you didn't answer my questions. Replicated below: -SanGabriel- ♀ (361 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:46:14

• Ok, -hammerheadshark- ♀ (677 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 13:24:51

• A modification to your English verse... -SanGabriel- ♀ (454 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 08:59:24

• yes, the more, the merrier! -hammerheadshark- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 09:32:59

• That's fine. -SanGabriel- ♀ (29 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 09:54:08