comes from the subconscious conversion from Chinese to English.
And it will improve your version if you change "a man" into "one
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• Some words got cut off. So here is the complete comment: -聚曦亭- ♀ (198 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:21:30
• I really don't see the difference. -hammerheadshark- ♀ (220 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:28:55
• Yes, it would be a big improvement! -聚曦亭- ♀ (711 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 10:43:52
• I thought you'd go there -hammerheadshark- ♀ (245 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 13:31:36