A modification to your English verse...

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回答: My versionhammerheadshark2013-07-20 20:54:06

美酒飲教微醉後,好花看到半開時
A man knows a wine only at tipsy;
A flower becomes a true beauty only at half-blooming.


The following is a modification to your verse in which I have tried to make a less aggressive statement about the art of appreciation.

At tipsy a man knows a wine best;
At half-blooming a flower shows its true beauty.

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yes, the more, the merrier! -hammerheadshark- 給 hammerheadshark 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 09:32:59

That's fine. -SanGabriel- 給 SanGabriel 發送悄悄話 (29 bytes) () 07/21/2013 postreply 09:54:08

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