A man knows a wine only at tipsy; (Ambiguous! Which is at tipsy: a man or a wine?)
A flower becomes a true beauty only at half-blooming. (“A flower...at half-blooming”sounds Chinese. )
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Hope this will clarify
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07/21/2013 postreply
09:32:17
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And it will improve your version if you change "a man" into "one
-聚曦亭-
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07/21/2013 postreply
10:18:15
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Some words got cut off. So here is the complete comment:
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07/21/2013 postreply
10:21:30
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I really don't see the difference.
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07/21/2013 postreply
10:28:55
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Yes, it would be a big improvement!
-聚曦亭-
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07/21/2013 postreply
10:43:52
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I thought you'd go there
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07/21/2013 postreply
13:31:36
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No, it doesn't.
-SanGabriel-
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07/21/2013 postreply
10:23:39
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As I said
-hammerheadshark-
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07/21/2013 postreply
10:33:53
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But you didn't answer my questions. Replicated below:
-SanGabriel-
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07/21/2013 postreply
10:46:14
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Ok,
-hammerheadshark-
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07/21/2013 postreply
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