Woke up before dawn

2008-08-17 11:40:39

Woke up before dawn
      my dream escaped…

Running through the mist
morning hesitated
      to cover up Stars
            the Moon
            and a sliver of
                  traumatized blue

雲易發表評論於 2008-11-08 09:32:01

回複作舟的評論:
thanks!

作舟發表評論於 2008-11-04 10:19:47

nice poem!!!

雲易發表評論於 2008-08-17 14:28:23

回複太陽屋的評論:
非常感謝！

太陽屋 發表評論於 2008-08-17 13:25:19

喜歡你詩中的意境。問好。

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Woke up before dawn

雲易 (2008-08-17 11:40:39) 評論 (4)

Woke up before dawn
      my dream escaped…

Running through the mist
morning hesitated
      to cover up Stars
            the Moon
            and a sliver of
                  traumatized blue

Woke up before dawn

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Woke up before dawn