（古詩詞英譯）天淨沙 秋 – （元）朱庭玉

天淨沙 秋 – （元）朱庭玉

 

庭前落盡梧桐，水邊開徹芙蓉。

解與詩人意同。

辭柯霜葉，飛來就我題紅。

 

Autumn by Zhu Ting-yu (Yuan Dynasty)

 

All parasol leaves fall and strew the yard,

All poolside lotus blooms as sere as charred.

As though construing the deepmost of bard,

A maple leaf, frost-fraught —

Sprig-snatched, flies forth, beseeching my verse hard.

 

V2.

All parasol leaves fall and strew the yard,

All poolside lotus blooms as sere as charred.

As though construing the deepmost of bard,

A maple leaf, frost-scarred —

Ascends, twig-torn, beseeching my lines hard.

 

Tr. Ziyuzile

16/04/2025

(To be revised)

 

 用詞不同，詩意不同，效果不同，結局不同。