煙圈兒 （二）
一個夜色重疊著另一個夜色
煙頭忽亮忽暗的信號
變的捉摸不定
一個男人的歎息
被煙圈兒鎖在黑暗裏
他說
我啥也沒有了
。。。
別跟著我了
一個女人柔軟的長發
一個令人窒息的體溫
煙圈兒 （二）
舞曼西樓 (2006-05-06 18:32:31) 評論 (1)煙圈兒 （二）
一個夜色重疊著另一個夜色
煙頭忽亮忽暗的信號
變的捉摸不定
一個男人的歎息
被煙圈兒鎖在黑暗裏
他說
我啥也沒有了
。。。
別跟著我了
一個女人柔軟的長發
一個令人窒息的體溫
海外博客
煙圈兒 （二）
oneline 發表評論於
This one is better than the first one.
Subtle yet deeper. This style is more powerful!
I don't think you should post there, they will not understand
and they may misjudge you as a person.
Just my view.
Keep going, this is a form of creation of art with a few words.
Subtle yet deeper. This style is more powerful!
I don't think you should post there, they will not understand
and they may misjudge you as a person.
Just my view.
Keep going, this is a form of creation of art with a few words.
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