Earlier chapter said that Jia Lan wounded someone, not kill. So this wounded one was done by Jia Lan?
擁林 發表評論於
回複datuzi的評論:
It's not necessary 忠順親王是李壽成一夥的. 忠順親王是皇上的皇家兄弟, the reason he didn't want to go to the war might be he had grave concern over 立儲大事, so he wanted to stay in the capital to help his favorite candidate, who could be any 皇子. 宮廷權場 is very complicated, people ally with each other based on their interests. Even 南王 may not hold grudge for his son's failing to 偷納一妾.
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回複wumiao的評論:
Miao Mei Mei, your revision looks perfect.
jiajia07 發表評論於
"朱英就跪下,一句話也說不出..."
Zhu Ying already knelt down, according to an earlier sentence "變成醉紅,隻跪下謝道..."
jiajia07 發表評論於
回複wumiao的評論:
Miao Mei Mei, I know you can dynamically revise and polish the story here :-) You know our goal is the same - we would like your story to be perfect and be our favorite from any perspective. Thanks very much for your prompt efforts to make the story perfect. And thanks very much for considering our thoughts.
We should have more discussions. Everyone should be more active in the discussions. That will make our reading journey even more fun. Meanwhile, it will make our waiting time more fun and less nervous :-)
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回複datuzi的評論:
嗬嗬,暗藏的階級敵人真多!
datuzi 發表評論於
忠順親王,南王,兵部尚書李壽成都是一夥的,敵我力量懸殊。現在刀都架在脖子上了。
pinkkiwi 發表評論於
回複我似浮雲獨自遊的評論:
agree. but let's get the baby first.
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回複littlehedgehog的評論:
yes, that's him. "將在外君命有所不受。我不聽他的,是因為他太聽從別人的." "別人" should be 忠順親王.
Seems that Li Fei wants Shui Rong to be killed, or she lost her position in front of her father and her aunt Queen, or she cannot control the situation? If people were sent from the capital aiming to kill Shui Rong, curious whether Li Fei knows it or not.
jiajia07 發表評論於
“別管他們---你讓我怕死了,也想死了我。”
Should Shui Rong first comfort Dai Yu for earlier attack? Dai Yu never saw battle before.
jiajia07 發表評論於
"打開讓黛玉和紫鵑吃了些..."
Some people are coming. Should Dai Yu and Zi Juan be sent to the secret place right away, instead of having food first?
datuzi 發表評論於
回複jiajia07的評論:
Thank you! ^_^
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回複littlehedgehog的評論:
don't worry, 黛玉已經是中期的五個多月了,水溶不會讓黛玉騎馬的. but next episode, i think there is a big fighting.