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《未選擇的路》

作者：弗羅斯特（Yimusanfendi譯）

 

黃色的樹林裏分出兩條路， 

可惜我不能兩條同時前往。

我這孤客在路口久久站駐， 

朝下望向一條路的最遠處，

直到它在叢林邊彎曲隱藏。

 

我選了同樣美的另一路徑，

或許可說這條路更加新奇,

因它芳草萋萋渴望被踩平;

盡管兩條路上走過的身形，

其實曾留下同樣多的痕跡。

 

那個清晨兩條路同在眼前，

同被葉覆蓋未被腳步踏黑。 

哦，將頭條路留待另一天，

雖然知道路與路條條相連， 

恐怕將來我再也不會返回。 

 

日後在某地我已老上加老，

帶著一聲歎息將這事講述： 

一片樹林裏分出兩條岔道，

我選擇了更少人走的那條， 

因此就有了不一樣的旅途。 

 

The Road Not Taken

 

(By Robert Frost)

 

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,

And sorry I could not travel both

And be one traveler, long I stood

And looked down one as far as I could

To where it bent in the undergrowth;

 

Then took the other, as just as fair,

And having perhaps the better claim,

Because it was grassy and wanted wear;

Though as for that the passing there

Had worn them really about the same,

 

And both that morning equally lay

In leaves no step had trodden black.

Oh, I kept the first for another day!

Yet knowing how way leads on to way,

I doubted if I should ever come back.

 

I shall be telling this with a sigh

Somewhere ages and ages hence:

Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—

I took the one less traveled by,

And that has made all the difference.

 

所有跟帖： 

• 譯文和原詩一樣漂亮！！問好田兄. -荷花清香- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2016 postreply 19:23:39

• 謝荷妹鼓勵。 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2016 postreply 21:55:02

• 譯的好，讚 -前世無理- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2016 postreply 21:41:49

• 謝前兄臨貼鼓勵 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2016 postreply 21:57:05

• 謝謝分享！拜讀欣賞！ -石蝶- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2016 postreply 22:34:35

• +1 -寒硯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 03:10:51

• 這首譯作堪稱精品了。。。俺不甘心滴雞蛋裏挑骨頭哈： -泥鰍兒- ♀ (1201 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 04:51:06

• 鰍大王挑得好！深謝！ -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (233 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 05:35:20

• 新奇，好，有回味嚼頭兒。讚：))) -泥鰍兒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 06:15:19

• 譯詩很難，讚！ -北極湖- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 11:05:27

• 謝北兄 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 11:38:05

• 譯得真好~~ -忘憂萱草- ♀ (5185 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 11:11:43

• 好! 挺好! 謝謝~~~~ -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (41 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 11:36:59

• 嗯， -忘憂萱草- ♀ (163 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 11:50:57

• And having perhaps the better claim,/或許有著更好的理由 ：這是正確的翻譯。 -yuanxiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 12:27:55

• 同意。改為“或許可聲稱有更好的道理；” -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 13:52:37

• claim的原意是聲稱主權(，以期回報。)。。。聯係上下文，作者把這條路當作一種通向無限可能的方向之始。因此，譯作“新奇”很達意 -泥鰍兒- ♀ (366 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 14:22:05

• 一詞多義，Claim 在這裏應該是 the right or privilege to (taking the road). -yuanxiang- ♂ (401 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 14:50:09

• 更正一下，應該是叫做主謂結構的狀語。 -yuanxiang- ♂ (1857 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 15:14:05

• 謝謝沅兄討論，俺覺得 -泥鰍兒- ♀ (529 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 16:34:43

• 我個人理解見貼。謝沅兄批評指正 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (1587 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 17:21:33

• 謝謝沅湘兄~~~~ -忘憂萱草- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 14:57:53

• 我旁觀了好久，覺得你的理解是正確的，所以才說。 -yuanxiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 15:18:03

• 能翻譯的都是牛人：P～ -蘇茉兒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2016 postreply 12:26:18