克裏斯蒂娜·羅塞蒂十四行詩《Remember 記著》

Remember
《記著》

Christina Rossetti (1830 - 1894)
作者：克裏斯蒂娜·羅塞蒂

翻譯：忒綠

Remember me when I am gone away,
記著我吧，當我就要遠走，

Gone far away into the silent land;
去遙遠的一塊寂靜之地；

When you can no more hold me by the hand,
當你不能再握我的手時，

Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.
我也不再能夠半走半留。

Remember me when no more day by day
記著我吧，當你不再能夠

You tell me of our future that you planned:
成天地談論我們的未來：

Only remember me; you understand
隻是記著我吧；你要明白

It will be late to counsel then or pray.
勸說禱告是太晚的徒勞。

Yet if you should forget me for a while
即使你一些日子忘了我

And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
而後又想起，請不要悲哀：

For if the darkness and corruption leave
因為如果黑暗以及腐敗

A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,
讓我在你心中留下殘跡，

Better by far you should forget and smile
此時，你最好忘記並微笑

Than that you should remember and be sad.
不要依然記著，空留悲戚。

Christina Georgina Rossetti (5 December 1830– 29 December 1894) was an English writer of romantic, devotional and children's poems, including "Goblin Market" and "Remember". She also wrote the words of two Christmas carols well known in Britain: "In the Bleak Midwinter", later set by Gustav Holst, Katherine Kennicott Davis, and Harold Darke, and "Love Came Down at Christmas", also set by Darke and other composers. She was a sister of the artist and poet Dante Gabriel Rossetti II and features in several of his paintings.

Rosetti wrote the poem in 1849 at the age of 19, though it was first published in 1862 in her collection Goblin Market and Other Poems.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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• 語言沒有時間的限製，綠詩人把100多年前的詩翻譯得忒忒好，味道押韻都剛剛好：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 15:43:39

• 妖妖午安：） -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 15:47:00

• 詩是靈魂的歌，沒有年輪：）周末愉快！ -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 15:48:00

• 這是那個時代的詩歌玩法：十四行詩，將就韻律和固定字節。這首詩中，每一行有十個音節。翻成中文每行同樣的字數有點難：）拋磚 -忒忒綠- ♂ (252 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 15:56:00

• 真好，學習了。詩歌詩歌，每行的音節數就像歌詞的音節數一樣是有限製的。 -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 16:14:30

• Very commendable effort on 綠綠‘s part. To -ibelieu- ♀ (351 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 16:53:30

• Hi Ibe, thanks for your nice comments:)) -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 16:59:00

• 謝謝分享。點讚。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 18:41:34

• and very good suggestion for the third line fm bottom. Could it -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:02:00

• could it be shorter into ten Chinese characters:)) -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:04:00

• 盡管黑暗並同朽腐降臨，如若我對你的影響猶存 -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:21:02

• very nice! we still think about the rhymes to compliant with con -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:40:00

• 如若我的影響猶存痕跡？ ：） -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:46:48

• And, is there a better rendition for “the thoughts”? -忒忒綠- ♂ (209 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:42:00

• 是很難，詩的原意似乎就是：我更希望你能忘了我這個人， -ibelieu- ♀ (86 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:49:02

• I follow the link to read the analysis on the poem :)) -忒忒綠- ♂ (361 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 18:02:00

• 很棒。讚。周末愉快。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 18:39:16

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