could it be shorter into ten Chinese characters:))

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• 盡管黑暗並同朽腐降臨，如若我對你的影響猶存 -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:21:02

• very nice! we still think about the rhymes to compliant with con -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:40:00

• 如若我的影響猶存痕跡？ ：） -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:46:48

• And, is there a better rendition for “the thoughts”? -忒忒綠- ♂ (209 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:42:00

• 是很難，詩的原意似乎就是：我更希望你能忘了我這個人， -ibelieu- ♀ (86 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:49:02

• I follow the link to read the analysis on the poem :)) -忒忒綠- ♂ (361 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 18:02:00