【大湖一語 小橋閑言,01】:漢英小詩 一語:
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插圖、圖片、視頻、音頻:
春湖一景 古風雙語
薄霧鎖湖迷鐵橋
綠水白雲欣然飄
遠岸春意盡噴薄
引來黑鵝曲項歌
薄霧鎖湖迷鐵橋
綠水白雲欣然飄
近聞黑鵝曲項歌
遠岸春意已妖嬈
(改於 2009 春)
近聆,遠聞,
Foggy Lakes locked, n heavy
under the bridge in mistry
Green water edged by clouds white,
Spring's in delight, Geese danced happily and gay
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約翰雷 K. Shaw
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i am thinking of :
01:green water, or water with greeen、 as you said.
02:Geese dance, replace: Geese danced
03: happy and gay? Not:happily and gay?
What do you think?