一個攝影大叔對照片的建議

晚上準備睡覺了，突然收到一個message，是以前一起騎車的一個大叔發來的消息。

他很少發消息給我，但是我知道他以前是職業攝影師，每次我們出去騎車，他都會給我們拍非常棒的照片，就是用普通的iphone拍照。但是我自己就拍不出那種感覺。我覺得和構圖非常有關。

他是看到了前幾天我和愛美麗晨跑時候我隨手給愛美麗拍的一張照片，突然來了興趣點評了幾句，頓時有種蓬蓽生輝的感覺，這還是我一邊跑一邊拍的，拍一下自己的肩膀，哈哈。

第一張是我拍的，第二張是大叔重新crop一下。大家看看有啥區別嗎？嘻嘻

I loved the picture you posted. You know that I was a professional photographer for many years. I used to enter print competition, so I learned many things about composition. Your daughter is the subject, and you have several interesting leading lines—the trees, the path. All of those things are in the bottom of your image, so you don't need all that sky diluting the effect. I've included my idea for cropping. This is a suggestion and if it is unwelcome, or if you disagree, you don't hurt my feelings if you don't like it. But just know that I rarely take the time to make such a suggestion—only when i see such a lovely image that can be improved by something as simple as cropping. It's nice to compose in camera (or phone) but I like the ability to be able to take my time and analyze the image afterwards, so this is not a criticism!

[intou2]

這個留白剪的好

[藍山飛狐]

確實好了很多。主體更突出，結構更穩定。