翻譯唐代詩人王之渙的《登鸛雀樓》，高手盡管指教

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唐代詩人王之渙的《登鸛雀樓》

白日依山盡，
The sun is setting into the mountains,
黃河入海流。
Toward the ocean The Yellow River rushes,
欲窮千裏目，
To see as far as a thousand miles,
更上一層樓。
Up another storey he climbs.