致少女 For My Love 作者：元梁，翻譯：美壇奇葩

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詩歌：致少女 -- 獻給瑩瑩 　作者：元梁 　詩歌：For My Love -- Dedicated to Ying Ying 　翻譯：美壇奇葩; 藝術創作：婉蕠 清澈的小河 依偎著 起伏的山壑 A clear river Winding with A gully in the mountains 簡陋的小屋 點綴著 碧綠的秧禾 Simple shanties Dotting the Green landscape 揚鞭的小童 吆喝著 笨重的牛車 Whip-flipping kids Tending their Heavy oxcarts 飛舞的小鳥 斑斕著 茂密的枝柯 Flying birds Coloring Dense leaves and branches 秀美的少女 歡喜這 田園的春色 A beautiful girl Is taking pleasure In the scenes of nature 俏麗的麵龐 純淨的眼波 你, 卻是我的天國 Your pretty face And innocent glances Make my kingdom of heaven 哦, 可愛的姑娘 你象那安詳的白鴿 一切神情 都那麽溫柔, 平和 Oh, my lovely girl Peaceful as a dove Your expression Is gentle and calm 哦, 親愛的姑娘 你如那優雅的天鵝 每個姿態 都那麽高貴, 獨特 Oh, my dear girl Graceful as a swan Every gesture of yours Is noble and unique 多麽希望 ---- 這愛意始萌的歡樂 在此銘刻 你的笑靨 將永遠珍放在 我心中的像冊 How much I hope -- My joy of sprouting love Is here inscribed And your smile Will always remain In my heart's album 多麽盼望 ---- 這愛意始萌的歡樂 此水長歌 你的情懷 將永久難忘在 我未來的生活 How much I expect -- That my joy of budding love Will with the river persist And your image In my whole life Will never faint 多想就這樣陪著你嗬 好像蒼山伴著青河 … I am dreaming to be with you forever Just like green mountains with the clear river … ******** 元梁/Yuan Liang Beijing. May 1, 1980. Translation: 美壇奇葩 Artistic Design: 婉蕠 @WXC. June 22, 2010. 450) this.width=450" />

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• Thank 婉蕠 for the artistic design !!! -美壇奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 13:37:13

• 美壇奇葩，感謝你為美語壇的網友們翻譯了無數的作品。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 15:59:27

• 經典的美貼，這個要鼎！ -千與.千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 14:50:35

• 謝謝小千。祝你夏天快樂。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 16:00:10

• 奇葩添異彩，美壇更嬌豔，鼎！ -水中撈月- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 16:34:07

• 好詩句。 -婉蕠- ♀ (72 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 17:07:27

• better -bearsback- ♂ (35 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 17:57:30

• excepting your version. houhou! -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 18:31:27

• oops,w.w. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 12:23:30

• What is o o p s , w . w . ? -美壇奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:27:14

• wrong words. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 19:18:15

• Thanks. I thought it was a World War. -美壇奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/24/2010 postreply 05:32:59

• hope there will be an English wording war in this forum. hehe -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/24/2010 postreply 09:08:41

• It is your turn now. -美壇奇葩- ♂ (29 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 07:10:22

• yes, bear, it is your turn. :) i'm waiting for your v1 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 10:38:16

• haha 寶貝，我刷碗還沒吃飯呢 -bearsback- ♂ (218 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:01:06

• A good beginning -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (104 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:15:35

• sweetie, let's help15 run the remaining -bearsback- ♂ (14 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:24:10

• help15 is great. 據說她剛買了３塊bricks。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 16:45:06

• haha, then time for her to show off:) -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:45:47

• the alliteration"clear creek clinges" 真的有種 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (51 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:27:37

• sharp ears -bearsback- ♂ (105 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:54:26

• 在這句裏，我喜歡 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (267 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 14:00:59

• 回複：在這句裏，我喜歡 -bearsback- ♂ (196 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 14:09:20

• 你好厲害！PFPF. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (368 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 17:15:28

• 對不起啊，bear。我是瞎說一通。haha。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (66 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:24:30

• 都是我借你一塊磚給鬧的, 哼, 還回來! haha. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:41:14

• you were absolutely right when you said -bearsback- ♂ (73 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:47:01

• 回複：對不起啊，bear。我是瞎說一通。haha。 -bearsback- ♂ (88 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:49:51

• sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations! -bearsback- ♂ (329 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:45:09

• 回複：sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations! -bearsback- ♂ (24 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:57:03

• thanks. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (54 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 19:48:21

• 回複：thanks. -bearsback- ♂ (203 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:20:55

• 都不錯。like the 1st 2 best. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (169 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 19:43:11

• now, like all of them:):) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:15:27

• 回複：now, like all of them:):) -bearsback- ♂ (195 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:36:18

• 有道理。:) 謝好譯 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:51:36

• 直譯 -bearsback- ♂ (108 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 22:06:20

• 更直的。。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (118 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 22:42:34

• hahaha, I love it -bearsback- ♂ (33 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 23:04:34

• 寶貝 -bearsback- ♂ (16 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:39:35

• hahahaha... ok -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (34 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:44:47

• 回複：都不錯。like the 1st 2 best. -bearsback- ♂ (55 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:25:25

• 才看見，，真美啊！太感激奇葩兄的美譯了！同時感謝婉蕠妹妹的美貼！ -元梁- ♂ (60 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 21:20:25

• 問候元梁，謝謝你的好詩。祝你夏安。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 06:55:15

• 這好像不是新版的，要不要我再把新版的詩詞貼出來？再次深深地感謝仁兄和大家！ -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 21:24:27

• beautiful! final, star? :) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 10:40:30

• I have handed in my homework. -美壇奇葩- ♂ (42 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 11:11:59

• you did a wonderful job. you got A plus.. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (24 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 11:50:08

• 回複： -美壇奇葩- ♂ (43 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 11:58:18

• hehehe... i expect your goal is "++" or "+++" -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (49 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:19:17

• See you in Los Angeles. -美壇奇葩- ♂ (63 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:26:14

• wowow, it is Los Angeles. hahaha. yes, i am waiting LA -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:31:22