sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations!

I love your insight!

let's me try the second stanza:

簡陋的小屋
點綴著
碧綠的秧禾

simple shacks
ornament
a green paddy field

or

humble huts
ornament
a green paddy field

or

one or two shacks
ornament
a green paddy field

or
a humble hut
....

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• 回複：sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations! -bearsback- ♂ (24 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:57:03

• thanks. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (54 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 19:48:21

• 回複：thanks. -bearsback- ♂ (203 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:20:55

• 都不錯。like the 1st 2 best. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (169 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 19:43:11

• now, like all of them:):) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:15:27

• 回複：now, like all of them:):) -bearsback- ♂ (195 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:36:18

• 有道理。:) 謝好譯 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:51:36

• 直譯 -bearsback- ♂ (108 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 22:06:20

• 更直的。。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (118 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 22:42:34

• hahaha, I love it -bearsback- ♂ (33 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 23:04:34

• 寶貝 -bearsback- ♂ (16 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:39:35

• hahahaha... ok -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (34 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:44:47

• 回複：都不錯。like the 1st 2 best. -bearsback- ♂ (55 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:25:25