sweetie, I love you more than you know:)

sweetie again you have written a piece that is unsurmountable. Your piece is as clear as an undisturbed brook and it flows as smoothly as a river flows to a creek on a calm day. Sweetie you might not have realized, but your writing follows orwell's rules as closely as a man follows his sweetheart and your writing embraces orwell's thoughts as tightly an innocent girl clings to her first love:)
sweetie, yes I remember your 'write to express, not to impress' and I think it says it all

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• 能得到老熊的認可甚至於誇獎，我就沒白寫。。你真會誇人：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 14:47:46

• sweetie from your writings alone, I would -hahaman- ♀ (104 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 14:58:27

• i don't want everything from you, but -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (11 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:36:50

• haha, sweetie, you are so cute -hahaman- ♀ (77 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 17:13:46

• hahaman，你寫的太美了，but -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (334 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 14:59:33

• opps, but your writing DID NOT follow orwell's rules -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:02:36

• who said that? i follow -hahaman- ♀ (10 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 16:43:02

• bear，這是我試著寫並改的東西。經過這個piece，我對 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (728 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:13:26

• 這是試著改了第一段，加上了rhyme，其實，不完全是起初想表達的。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (214 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:22:29

• 回複：這是試著改了第一段，加上了rhyme，其實，不完全是起初想表達的。 -hahaman- ♀ (106 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 17:11:40

• 對，韻是這些詩體的一個要求。否則，就不能叫做１４行詩了 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (515 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 20:46:02

• oh, this is a misplacement. meant to follow with the one below. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 20:52:25

• sweetie you are as fast as light -hahaman- ♀ (269 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:00:11

• 謝謝bear。你真的是博學，一點不錯。learned. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (107 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:06:49

• sweetie，你的詩寫的真是很流暢。 -hahaman- ♀ (395 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:24:02

• 別抒情了；）。 我這周有deadline要meet。晚安。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:33:41

• Ok sweetie. I also have so much to do. Work is too much. -hahaman- ♀ (139 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:47:35

• hmm。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (50 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 20:07:19

• 剛要合上書本,your line make me忽然想起來你那個＂閃電門拴＂了：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (105 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:30:16

• haha sweetie, how do you remember everything? -hahaman- ♀ (41 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:41:39

• flys-->>flies -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:27:27

• bear，我跟著你練了這麽多詩歌，這首是我比較 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (211 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:52:27

• sweetie 不要考慮韻除非是十四行等 -hahaman- ♀ (154 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 19:41:24

• this is -hahaman- ♀ (401 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 17:01:52

• 謝謝hahaman。我在看小人書。talk to u later。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 18:25:16

• sweetie I read it again and again -hahaman- ♀ (141 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 08:24:52

• great, -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (27 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 18:12:16