對，韻是這些詩體的一個要求。否則，就不能叫做１４行詩了

ok

i like the way you smile
and the way you joke
i love to see you show off
and read your remarks
i can feel what you feel
and think what you think
i'm glad when you're happy
and sad when you'er blue

（還有４行，沒寫完。是不想寫完）


很多人都說韻不重要，但不管什麽詩體有韻就是感覺漂亮。要不怎麽會有＂韻味＂＂風韻＂等一係列與美麗相關的的字眼呢？:)

我覺得語言能力強的人詞匯豐富的人來韻來的容易：）。所以我在誇你呢， bear。

我根本就不想寫詩，就是覺得好玩。

所有跟帖： 

• oh, this is a misplacement. meant to follow with the one below. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 20:52:25

• sweetie you are as fast as light -hahaman- ♀ (269 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:00:11

• 謝謝bear。你真的是博學，一點不錯。learned. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (107 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:06:49

• sweetie，你的詩寫的真是很流暢。 -hahaman- ♀ (395 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:24:02

• 別抒情了；）。 我這周有deadline要meet。晚安。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:33:41

• Ok sweetie. I also have so much to do. Work is too much. -hahaman- ♀ (139 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:47:35

• hmm。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (50 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 20:07:19

• 剛要合上書本,your line make me忽然想起來你那個＂閃電門拴＂了：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (105 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:30:16

• haha sweetie, how do you remember everything? -hahaman- ♀ (41 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:41:39