sweetie you are as fast as light

you can write. within seconds you came up with 8 thoughtful lines. As always I am impressed.
Shakespeare often had to reorder words in order to have a rhyme. If we just follow the usual 主語 + 謂語，it's hard to get a good rhyme. True, vacabulary is important.

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• 謝謝bear。你真的是博學，一點不錯。learned. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (107 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:06:49

• sweetie，你的詩寫的真是很流暢。 -hahaman- ♀ (395 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:24:02

• 別抒情了；）。 我這周有deadline要meet。晚安。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:33:41

• Ok sweetie. I also have so much to do. Work is too much. -hahaman- ♀ (139 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:47:35

• hmm。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (50 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 20:07:19

• 剛要合上書本,your line make me忽然想起來你那個＂閃電門拴＂了：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (105 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:30:16

• haha sweetie, how do you remember everything? -hahaman- ♀ (41 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:41:39