hahaman，你寫的太美了，but

writing follows orwell's rules。 u used metaphor/simile to impress me, and to touch my heart. hahaha...joking.
your writing is so beautiful, indeed.

the gist of Orwell 's article , people use language improperly, mainly applies to political and and economic areas. 你的詩歌如果follow這些rules，將會多麽boring：）

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• opps, but your writing DID NOT follow orwell's rules -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:02:36

• who said that? i follow -hahaman- ♀ (10 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 16:43:02