【英語詩評】古風新韻

 "波幽,臨水,...飛爛漫"

 

 - 敲月下湖大元宵,推字填文字,敲月思鄉情 

---

 源自：Google photo

---

【敲月下湖大元宵】

序：每逢佳節陪思親，海外華人普天慶，文化猶如遠方的草地，俞遠則更綠，海外網絡遊子紛紛寫下元宵詩，我也湊了幾句，還與友人有一番討教，對著湖麵一個大大的月亮，我用了個 “敲”字，還琢磨著用 “推”來做動詞。你們說呢？

Holidays arose people's sentimental feelings of the land called home. This is not at all any thing new, because it is already depicted  some thousand years ago as in the Dang poems. This tradition keeps overseas Chinese busy,  writing something openly or even to themselves when a bright moon hanging over there, or hiding behind the clouds. A night called - "Moon Festival".

In its modernity form, of the Cyberspace, it fascinating to see as many as millions of people in foreign lands crowded with young and old making songs and poems emotionally of their homesick, or self amusement. I am not an exception, made here a few lines tonight to imitate the rhythms.

"Tui", the action verb in Chinese, is 'to push sth by force" or "Qiao" to say "knocking something off", or down, I used the verb "knock", the moon into the lake,  for it was so big and close to us hanging in the night sky over the lake. According to the news today, the moon we saw tonight, Feb 9, this year of 2009 was the biggest we might be able to have envisioned ever from the earth since 1958. 

 

臨岸望遠三山高
敲月落湖大元宵

翻騰真情寫春風
遊子詩韻自唐朝

一語湖邊
Feb 12，2009

---

【Audio & Video】Ref:



記於 2009  元宵節

 Contact: [e-mail]

[一語湖邊_lakeshore]

日記：今日重溫此曲，發現演奏的老者那把 ‘樂器’十分特殊。
是‘箏’卻與現代的‘箏’豪華要古樸的去了，其音低沉委婉，餘音繚繞，。。

[林貝卡]

“敲月”二字獨特，謝謝分享。