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一語淺譯: "一斛珠" 兩首, ( Lake Louis )
When ever I have time free, I oftenvisit an elite Website, where readersoften encounter with very nice poems composed with their life experiences and sentimental based on their observations. It's called "楓華"-Feng-Hua in spelling.
Those poems are creations with language skills and beautiful images,rhymes, emotions in an ancient style, actually known as "Style ofDang-Poem" -an essential of Chinese literature, admired by many peoplenow and then, even including English speaking people.
But, how to put those poems of Ancient Style into English is always achallenge. However, only in doing so, can a person feel the beauty ofwhat i would like to call the "impressionism poems' from China, if incomparison with Japanese Four Sentences Philosophical Poems?
So, in trying to reverse what I call it, the unique 'impressionism' of 'Dang Style'into an English version has been my recent craziness, How does itapply English rule of poems making and read smoothly or not withoutlosing too much of its original taste and can Oriental aesthetic view beinterpreted in another language, also in a poetic way? I really don'tknow. "一斛珠" as for the example;
Here are two poems composed by a Poet, as believed in East part ofCanada, also one of the activists, His name is "東部“ -dong-bu, means from orsimply located in the east part of Canada.
Hope you enjoy it too.
Note by:
John-lakeshore, A maple leaf O'er the lakes.
Summer 2008
By 東部 Westca. com
http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=dgdd432z_790f88w4hcx&hl=en
"一斛珠", 路易絲湖 ( Lake Louis )
峻峰煙繚，
碧波蕩漾晴空邈(杳)。
魚翔淺底斜陽好，
擊水橫舟，
白鷺起紅蓼。
遠山雲緲冰川皎,
環堤茂密青青草。
一天四季盈嬌嬈，
仙境人間，
暮靄落霞嫋。
Version A
A handsome peak stands in distance, smoky, N sexy,
D green green waves shines as if sky falls in pieces and peace,
Few fishes swimming in water, shallowly, sun looks marble colored N of ruby,
A boat flows aimlessly, when a white bird, flew, elegantly, out from the wild-fields Wheat
The icy glaciers shines purely brightness, blurry mountains in clouds of misty,
thick grass grows green, and greens the lake-sides, in a day or in seasonal rally,
A place in between sky and earth that never dies, in morning hues and in setting sun rays.
Notes in everyday English:
A peak in distance looks smoky and sexy,
The lakes are wavy and the blue sky shines, quietness,
when the sun-rays shines through the water, fish is swimming in the shallow water of marble color,
let your boat stop without purpose, then there is white Bird (aigret) flying out of the fresh buck-weat in field wild.
The icy glaciers looks so pure and bright in background of far mountains and misty clouds,
there is green green grass that thickly grows along the dam, no mater a day or four seasons in a year,
a fairy place in human life, when always dies with the morning hues and setting sunlight
Version B
A Discussion, ( Between online-friends in China gate.com, A Website based in US.)
Eager to know your ideas, May this mail find you are doing well
一語湖邊
筆, 零八年七月
Lake-Shore, Burlington Ca.
When ever I have time free, I oftenvisit an elite Website, where readersoften encounter with very nice poems composed with their life experiences and sentimental based on their observations. It's called "楓華"-Feng-Hua in spelling.
Those poems are creations with language skills and beautiful images,rhymes, emotions in an ancient style, actually known as "Style ofDang-Poem" -an essential of Chinese literature, admired by many peoplenow and then, even including English speaking people.
But, how to put those poems of Ancient Style into English is always achallenge. However, only in doing so, can a person feel the beauty ofwhat i would like to call the "impressionism poems' from China, if incomparison with Japanese Four Sentences Philosophical Poems?
So, in trying to reverse what I call it, the unique 'impressionism' of 'Dang Style'into an English version has been my recent craziness, How does itapply English rule of poems making and read smoothly or not withoutlosing too much of its original taste and can Oriental aesthetic view beinterpreted in another language, also in a poetic way? I really don'tknow. "一斛珠" as for the example;
Here are two poems composed by a Poet, as believed in East part ofCanada, also one of the activists, His name is "東部“ -dong-bu, means from orsimply located in the east part of Canada.
Hope you enjoy it too.
Note by:
John-lakeshore, A maple leaf O'er the lakes.
Summer 2008
http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=dgdd432z_790f88w4hcx&hl=en
【東部古句 加西楓華 】
一斛珠. 夏日遊湖濱
岸邊異卉,
漫漫香氣熏人醉。
碧湖蕩漾粼波起，
戲水鴛鴦，
眷眷配雙對。
撐舟尋覓芙蓉翠，
輕搖晶露珠凝瑞。
葉間一朵姿嬌媚，
飛蝶鳴蜂,
戀戀聚花蕊.
A summer stroll on the lakeside
Version A
Summer flowers colors Lakeside N grows near,
Drunken when smells poisoning fragrance is in the Lakeside air ,
Waves swells and dance in the warm breezes,
sighted in water, two mandarin ducks happily play;
A couple of harmonious companion.
A Man sitting in boat with gaze in amazement for the greenish fairy tale,
But only crystals shines on leaves-tips that clinking in morning hue
A tiny flower amidst, smiles with softness N loving zeal,
Crazily, they dances butterflies and bees into the pinkie tenderness.
Notes in everyday English:
Various flowers grow along the lakeside, people are drunken with the fragrance from the flowers in the air.
the lakes are wavy ,and shiny when there is breeze on the lakes
but when you see they playing in the water, two mandarin ducks,
A couple of harmonious companion.
Sitting in a boat, you may sighted the pure greenness that only you can see from the lake lotus,
the morning mist shines jewelry crystallised on top of the flower leaves,
then you might notice a tiny little flower so softly and charmingly smiles,
and the summer butterflies and bees are dancing, gathering into the buds.
【 Piano A Walk In The Forest 】
From 北美文學城 美語世界 Audio Mp3:
一斛珠. 夏日遊湖濱
岸邊異卉,
漫漫香氣熏人醉。
碧湖蕩漾粼波起，
戲水鴛鴦，
眷眷配雙對。
撐舟尋覓芙蓉翠，
輕搖晶露珠凝瑞。
葉間一朵姿嬌媚，
飛蝶鳴蜂,
戀戀聚花蕊.
A summer stroll on the lakeside
Version A
Summer flowers colors Lakeside N grows near,
Drunken when smells poisoning fragrance is in the Lakeside air ,
Waves swells and dance in the warm breezes,
sighted in water, two mandarin ducks happily play;
A couple of harmonious companion.
A Man sitting in boat with gaze in amazement for the greenish fairy tale,
But only crystals shines on leaves-tips that clinking in morning hue
A tiny flower amidst, smiles with softness N loving zeal,
Crazily, they dances butterflies and bees into the pinkie tenderness.
Notes in everyday English:
Various flowers grow along the lakeside, people are drunken with the fragrance from the flowers in the air.
the lakes are wavy ,and shiny when there is breeze on the lakes
but when you see they playing in the water, two mandarin ducks,
A couple of harmonious companion.
Sitting in a boat, you may sighted the pure greenness that only you can see from the lake lotus,
the morning mist shines jewelry crystallised on top of the flower leaves,
then you might notice a tiny little flower so softly and charmingly smiles,
and the summer butterflies and bees are dancing, gathering into the buds.
【 Piano A Walk In The Forest 】
From 北美文學城 美語世界 Audio Mp3:
× Notes ：This piece Piano-Romance by artist Brain Crain is chosen from two friends recomandations, Here is my hearty thanks to them. The music matches so well with the Poems.
Thanks Yu-gong @ 北美文學城， 美語世界
Thanks Yu-gong @ 北美文學城， 美語世界
-Luis Lake Fall, By Author, Dong-bu
"一斛珠", 路易絲湖 ( Lake Louis )
峻峰煙繚，
碧波蕩漾晴空邈(杳)。
魚翔淺底斜陽好，
擊水橫舟，
白鷺起紅蓼。
遠山雲緲冰川皎,
環堤茂密青青草。
一天四季盈嬌嬈，
仙境人間，
暮靄落霞嫋。
Version A
A handsome peak stands in distance, smoky, N sexy,
D green green waves shines as if sky falls in pieces and peace,
Few fishes swimming in water, shallowly, sun looks marble colored N of ruby,
A boat flows aimlessly, when a white bird, flew, elegantly, out from the wild-fields Wheat
The icy glaciers shines purely brightness, blurry mountains in clouds of misty,
thick grass grows green, and greens the lake-sides, in a day or in seasonal rally,
A place in between sky and earth that never dies, in morning hues and in setting sun rays.
Notes in everyday English:
A peak in distance looks smoky and sexy,
The lakes are wavy and the blue sky shines, quietness,
when the sun-rays shines through the water, fish is swimming in the shallow water of marble color,
let your boat stop without purpose, then there is white Bird (aigret) flying out of the fresh buck-weat in field wild.
The icy glaciers looks so pure and bright in background of far mountains and misty clouds,
there is green green grass that thickly grows along the dam, no mater a day or four seasons in a year,
a fairy place in human life, when always dies with the morning hues and setting sunlight
Version B
Scenery of Luis Lake, Original Photo By Dong-bu, ( Credit to Author, Dong-bu )
( Seeking Romantic Piano Music of any classics that matches the poems )
征： 【浪漫鋼琴曲】Mp3:
征： 【浪漫鋼琴曲】Mp3:
A Discussion, ( Between online-friends in China gate.com, A Website based in US.)
Eager to know your ideas, May this mail find you are doing well
一語湖邊
筆, 零八年七月
Lake-Shore, Burlington Ca.
A piece of maple leaf O'er the lake that is foggy in the morning.
小戰士：一語淺譯
約翰 雷 K. Shaw Burlington, Ca. Summer, 2008 You can reach him at:
約翰 雷 K. Shaw Burlington, Ca. Summer, 2008 You can reach him at:
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