英譯 憶秦娥【婁山關】

【毛澤東詞婁山關英譯】憶秦娥【婁山關】

 

 

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西風烈，長空雁叫霜晨月。

霜晨月，馬蹄聲碎，喇叭聲咽。

Wind freeze, in valley; misty n screaming，

Goose flips the shadows, moon-shining,

honking, dawn-breaking, An icy morning.

An icy morning, in early spring; moon was pale, silent, n hiding;

horses sad, trump beats hurry, in distance army, moving.

雄關漫道真如鐵，而今邁步從頭越。

從頭越，蒼山如海，殘陽如血。

the walls of steel, stands speechless;

swords cold, trembling, yet wordless,

Move, the highest, cloudless; Crossing over

Crossing over, he's scratching, the hills, dark;

greenish, as deep sea; red, n bloody, the ruby-sun,

Young body, it's shooting, Out.

 

 

Friday, March 21, 2008

約翰雷K. Shaw Burlington, Ca.

北美文學社 與詩友 2008 年 春 三月

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• -To be continued

• 一語湖邊 johnlakeshore

• Revised Date :Friday, December 28, 2007 8:58:09 AM

• Personal notes, and future reference, only readers discretions advised！
  Readers can reach me at Add: [e-mail] (China) [e-mail] ( International )

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憶秦娥【婁山關】毛澤東一九三五年二月

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一語：聞，3.14 藏漢向突，國際間紛紛紜紜，憶年初觀影【投名狀】有感，真是：兵戎間，時空飛渡忍無煙. 忍無言，真情如仞，豆萁入宴。隱隱，鬱鬱，切切，憂憂，翻舊譯潤之。Then I see the imageries given in English, quite long, and different from Chinese. ( The red highlighted words are the newest )