I couldn't remember willow's waving hand
Nor I recall where by the lake you stand
We wandered and sit till fall of night
And decided to camp on this escape land.
I couldn't remember the color of the day's sky
Nor I recall those words you lie
In dreams I made myself repeat loud
With tears awake of me never were you proud
Adagios 發表評論於
回複鐵拐鯉的評論:
8 over 14 is 57%, I am just a tiny bid over halfway to sonnet.
BTW, few people here enjoy English poems. You are one of few exceptions. Your excellent English must have also brought you some additional joys!
鐵拐鯉 發表評論於
回複Adagios的評論:
噢，i thought you made this painting:). you set me up,企鵝，hehe。。 kidding.
I couldn't remember willow's waving hand
Nor I recall where by the lake you stand
We wandered and sit till fall of night
And decided to camp on this escape land.
I couldn't remember the color of the day's sky
Nor I recall those words you lie
In dreams I made myself repeat loud
With tears awake of me never were you proud
