Great Shakespearean sonnet. You need read "Catcher"?

you are still a high school student? Then you must be a genus. writing a real sonnet( not modern sonnets) is not that easy. Are you abc?

are you sure every line is presented with 10 syllables each? :-)

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• 胡了瞎評熊背詩。 -tack- ♂ (58 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 11:10:13

• what？you called him 熊老. sorry, i though -hulahu- ♀ (42 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 11:22:22

• 回複：what？you called him 熊老. sorry, i though -bearsback- ♂ (66 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 11:32:30

• wow，還會寫絕句。 佩服熊老。 -hulahu- ♀ (58 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 11:36:27

• 謝謝. 我最近在讀統計. 所以搞點syllable的誤差. confidence interval. ha -bearsback- ♂ (117 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 11:15:47

• forgive my dumb inf. -hulahu- ♀ (285 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 11:29:33

• you appear to be a smart woman. but please always remember: -bearsback- ♂ (79 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:15:18

• 你的意思是，真正的詩歌就是 -hulahu- ♀ (62 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:20:41

• 你太謙虛了，我是跟你鬧著玩的，別認真。 -hulahu- ♀ (246 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:11:10

• sis 好久沒來了，練習詩歌? -hulohu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:17:54

• 今天第一次來這裏。是朋友email說這裏可以學英語。 -hulahu- ♀ (33 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:23:22

• 咱倆怎麽長得這麽象？twins？我的中文ID是虎辣虎。 -hulahu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:26:45

• that's why i called you sis -hulohu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:31:36

• 我的中文ID是虎love虎。 -hulohu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:32:34

• i love your ID, 虎love虎. -hulahu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:37:48

• 我非常想念你的另一個sis -bearsback- ♂ (51 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 14:26:40

• 我怎麽這麽多sis？看來我要換個unique的名了。huhuya是誰？ -hulahu- ♀ (82 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 14:48:33

• 我沒工作 -bearsback- ♂ (2 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 16:41:15

• 我替huhuya為你寫了一首。haha -hulahu- ♀ (355 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 16:50:01

• 虎姐也是詩人也，姐姐何時也教我寫 -hulohu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 16:53:34

• 查了查曆史，熊老已經收了個徒弟，不知道你們有什麽關係？ -hulahu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:00:16

• 不習慣男老師，有的男老師毀人不倦，還是姐姐教我放心 -hulohu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:02:49

• 我覺得咱倆的確相如故。 難道你就是從小 -hulahu- ♀ (32 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:09:18

• 虎姐姐好記憶，你一說我也想起來啦，虎妹這廂有禮呐 -hulohu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:12:16

• i miss you, dear...(請熊老前輩給改改，hahaha) -hulahu- ♀ (267 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:14:36

• i am impressed -bearsback- ♂ (41 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:23:27

• haha，來湊個熱鬧。保重。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:45:14

• 我想你 -bearsback- ♂ (4 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:53:16

• 我下了，MM保重。明天上班。正下著大雪。 -hulahu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:16:53

• you are a 天才!!!!! -bearsback- ♂ (127 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:21:44

• it's hahaya, not me:) bye. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:46:24

• hahahaha you are smart. i love your poem!!!!! -bearsback- ♂ (35 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:33:48

• 你越說我越怕，桑拿真把你燒傻了。 -hulahu- ♀ (57 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 13:41:23

• 好好好 -bearsback- ♂ (16 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 14:25:12

• 雙關語。you'd better say: -hulahu- ♀ (54 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 14:54:36

• 還是把第二行認真認真吧。 -tack- ♂ (18 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 19:43:59

• 絕妙！謝謝大師！想了５分鍾也沒找到合適的字押韻。 -hulahu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 19:53:24

• 你介個有點急轉彎性質。:) -hulahu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 19:58:07

• 下次再遇到難題，我一定先請教你，tack老師：） -hulahu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 19:56:08

• 妙妙妙， 真的妙 -bearsback- ♂ (10 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 20:21:15

• 我還記得第一次我發燒跑詩壇裏玩，也是找不到合適的字，當時 -hulahu- ♀ (140 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 20:30:59

• hahaha, i remember something like that. 點點兒 was there -bearsback- ♂ (96 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 20:38:56