on a bright sunday we come to the shore
gulls fly over the sea wooing the waves
we lie under a tree seeing the birds soar
you write a sonnet, i give you my raves
your smile's so sweet,making the tree lusher
my song's so soft, making your face brighter
it's a real symphony, not a fantasy,
a concert by you and me, gulls and sea
我替huhuya為你寫了一首。haha
所有跟帖:
• 虎姐也是詩人也,姐姐何時也教我寫 -hulohu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 16:53:34
• 查了查曆史,熊老已經收了個徒弟,不知道你們有什麽關係? -hulahu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:00:16
• 不習慣男老師,有的男老師毀人不倦,還是姐姐教我放心 -hulohu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:02:49
• 我覺得咱倆的確相如故。 難道你就是從小 -hulahu- ♀ (32 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:09:18
• 虎姐姐好記憶,你一說我也想起來啦,虎妹這廂有禮呐 -hulohu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:12:16
• i miss you, dear...(請熊老前輩給改改,hahaha) -hulahu- ♀ (267 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:14:36
• i am impressed -bearsback- ♂ (41 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:23:27
• haha,來湊個熱鬧。保重。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:45:14
• 我想你 -bearsback- ♂ (4 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:53:16
• 我下了,MM保重。明天上班。正下著大雪。 -hulahu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:16:53
• you are a 天才!!!!! -bearsback- ♂ (127 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:21:44
• it's hahaya, not me:) bye. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 17:46:24