哈哈,俺剛看到,太有才了,俺很喜歡這兒歌（18-),俺消受的起~

這"裏拉"，"裏拉"的，"腳著裏拉屐，身穿裏拉衣" 乍一聽象是"腳著垃圾屐，身穿垃圾衣"，男同鞋就是缺點美感.

俺正時尚一人，就把俺往美裏吹吹唄
您說裏拉，沒人知道是lilac，你說丁香，大家就知道是lilac
改成“丁香”，意譯不音譯，不壞韻吧?

腳著丁香屐
身穿丁香衣
等到提筆時
方知水平低

大作俺收下了，回頭裱好了，掛俺博客裏~~

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• 哈哈，看我，丁香都沒認的，水平真是低。你改得好。 -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:45:18

• 俺很稀飯您這首英詩裏的amusement，比漢詩的有“藏”勁兒 -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:54:50

• I took it as "飯太稀" when I first looked at it. -amazing_grace- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 14:44:05

• 網路用語，網路用語 ~~ 就是不好好說話:) -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:32:14

• 謝謝解釋，我以前隻知道fantasy. -amazing_grace- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:48:15

• haha, 飯太稀. you are smart. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:50:29

• haha I know. I was also amused by the English one -bearsback- ♂ (79 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 19:14:58

• 回複：haha I know. I was also amused by the English one -lilac09- ♀ (381 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:47:26

• haha you are smart -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 00:54:02

• 雙語詩歌：愛的磁性 給裏拉 （lilac) 作者：bearsback -林貝卡- ♀ (4914 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:33:54

• hahahaha my goodness, that is beautiful. thank you! -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:44:40

• 貝卡mm，額的神呀，您先接受俺膜拜一下~~~~~ -lilac09- ♀ (112 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:53:31

• COOL。我也要學寫 兒歌 & SONNET。很受鼓勵 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:13:37

• 切! 這下你又不怕變成書呆子了？？ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:20:11

• 不用變，本來就是書呆子 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:23:59

• 哈麽意思？你是說bear是書呆子？hehe。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:25:23

• hehe, i got it。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:36:39

• 這麽漂亮！明年我結婚５０周年，一定找貝卡給我弄個跟這一樣的。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:30:47

• ５０周年,那得是在SPACE CRAFT上 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:40:32

• Sure. Just let me know when your wedding anniversary is. -林貝卡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:33:53

• 謝謝貝卡。差點missed點你的美意：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 09:58:33

• So pretty and I love the music too~~~ -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 19:03:36

• 回複：So pretty and I love the music too~~~ -林貝卡- ♀ (1761 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:39:11