愛的磁性 給裏拉 （lilac)

腳著裏拉屐
身穿裏拉衣
等到提筆時
方知水平低

wearing lilac's shoes
dressed in lilac's gown
penning 'love', I muse:
a verb or a noun?

所有跟帖： 

• 鼓掌，LOVE IS VERB &| NOUN。這是兒歌 | SONNET? -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 12:11:39

• haha ~ (兒歌 | SONNET) -bearsback- ♂ (22 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 12:21:10

• Cute and lovely. Chief Writer & Comedian. -念親- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 12:18:08

• 哈哈，你的愛是個動詞inspired this little poem -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 12:30:43

• hehe, nice 五言絕句. 裏拉哪去了? -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (68 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:12:21

• 寶貝兒呀，你太厲害了。你的才是真正的絕句呀。 -bearsback- ♂ (22 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:41:24

• ohh，李白原來是雄背虎爪猴拳呀~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:47:52

• I mean 熊背~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:50:24

• JUST，我可以拜你為師嗎。我也想寫詩，先教我兒歌也行 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:20:59

• 記住 -bearsback- ♂ (40 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:47:30

• ha, 密碼，你太可愛了~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:59:25

• 建議你先敗飛鷹為師，出師後在拜師祖。 -amazing_grace- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 16:37:11

• 哈哈,俺剛看到,太有才了,俺很喜歡這兒歌（18-),俺消受的起~ -lilac09- ♀ (351 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:25:44

• 哈哈，看我，丁香都沒認的，水平真是低。你改得好。 -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:45:18

• 俺很稀飯您這首英詩裏的amusement，比漢詩的有“藏”勁兒 -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:54:50

• I took it as "飯太稀" when I first looked at it. -amazing_grace- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 14:44:05

• 網路用語，網路用語 ~~ 就是不好好說話:) -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:32:14

• 謝謝解釋，我以前隻知道fantasy. -amazing_grace- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:48:15

• haha, 飯太稀. you are smart. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:50:29

• haha I know. I was also amused by the English one -bearsback- ♂ (79 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 19:14:58

• 回複：haha I know. I was also amused by the English one -lilac09- ♀ (381 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:47:26

• haha you are smart -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 00:54:02

• 雙語詩歌：愛的磁性 給裏拉 （lilac) 作者：bearsback -林貝卡- ♀ (4914 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:33:54

• hahahaha my goodness, that is beautiful. thank you! -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:44:40

• 貝卡mm，額的神呀，您先接受俺膜拜一下~~~~~ -lilac09- ♀ (112 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:53:31

• COOL。我也要學寫 兒歌 & SONNET。很受鼓勵 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:13:37

• 切! 這下你又不怕變成書呆子了？？ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:20:11

• 不用變，本來就是書呆子 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:23:59

• 哈麽意思？你是說bear是書呆子？hehe。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:25:23

• hehe, i got it。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:36:39

• 這麽漂亮！明年我結婚５０周年，一定找貝卡給我弄個跟這一樣的。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:30:47

• ５０周年,那得是在SPACE CRAFT上 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:40:32

• Sure. Just let me know when your wedding anniversary is. -林貝卡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:33:53

• 謝謝貝卡。差點missed點你的美意：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 09:58:33

• So pretty and I love the music too~~~ -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 19:03:36

• 回複：So pretty and I love the music too~~~ -林貝卡- ♀ (1761 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:39:11

• Jeez, that's deep. -小媛- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 22:06:02

• 謝謝大家,祝你們周三愉快,節日快樂. -林貝卡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:43:12