試譯: Peace by Sara Teasdale

（原詩很美妙，譯個大意獻醜。）

Peace by Sara Teasdale

Peace flows into me
  As the tide to the pool by the shore; 
  It is mine forevermore,
  It will not ebb like the sea.

I am the pool of blue 
  That worships the vivid sky; 
  My hopes were heaven-high,
  They are all fulfilled in you.

I am the pool of gold 
  When sunset burns and dies -- 
  You are my deepening skies;
  Give me your stars to hold.

 

潮水漫過岸邊清池，
安寧流入我心間。
祥和永駐心底，
不似潮汐時隱時見。

我是一池青藍，
仰慕著藍藍的天。
我的心願試比天高，
今在你安寧中實現。

我是一池金色，
夕陽下晚霞盡燃。
你是我深邃的太空，
讓我擁有群星燦爛。

所有跟帖： 

• 第一次讀到Sara Teasdale的詩歌,謝謝你美妙的翻譯和精美的配圖。 -斕婷- ♀ (2032 bytes) () 03/28/2012 postreply 11:00:29

• 謝謝。這兩首沒有讀過。真是美詩美畫！ -湘西山民- ♂ (57 bytes) () 03/28/2012 postreply 13:06:58

• 山民老師水平實在高，學生回頭再仔細拜讀。祝晚安！ -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/28/2012 postreply 14:25:17

• 翻得真棒！學習了。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/28/2012 postreply 16:17:03

• 不錯 -whatday- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/28/2012 postreply 21:01:55

• A wonderful translation!!! -NewVoice- ♀ (132 bytes) () 03/29/2012 postreply 05:31:31

• A poem can have different meanings to different people. -湘西山民- ♂ (661 bytes) () 03/29/2012 postreply 08:36:45

• 謝各位捧場。大家多交流。 -湘西山民- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/29/2012 postreply 10:42:30