Please revise,thx!

 The basic meaning is hidden in  structure, etc.,  of Chinese characters and letters  of corresponding English words,   the connection is vitally interrelated.  Further, it can be related to a master painting design, such as in Ilya Repin's famous painting  "Religious procession in Kursk province” , which would be a vivid illustration of this idea. But how to analyze it?

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• 既然沒人改，我的手也癢，我就來改改吧。再說，這塊論壇也太冷清了。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (727 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 18:23:13

• Thx! if you may point out the error or deficency in my writing w -走馬讀人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:01:58

• I checked hide vs. conceal, it suits me to read different versio -走馬讀人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:06:09

• correspond vs. coincide, as well, again it is a good in "groupin -走馬讀人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:24:16

• 你的correspond 不是當動詞用的，所以我以為你要說的是“相應”的意思。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:32:04

• 你如果把你想說的用中文表達出來，我或許可以給你提些有用的建議。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (66 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:35:09

• ThX! My idea frustrated some Americans, whose mind is in confine -走馬讀人- ♂ (207 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:47:12

• 我覺得原文本來就有些問題： -聚曦亭- ♀ (744 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:55:34

• 兩個意思放在了一個句子 very good point. -走馬讀人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:59:18

• 你是不是想說： -聚曦亭- ♀ (401 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:05:38

• 刪除一個意義單位是好的，使我得收穫. -走馬讀人- ♂ (32 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:11:37

• 如果你要說的就是我改後的中文意思，下麵的英語大體說出了你想要說的。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (1135 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:22:49

• Thanks for your valuable criticism! -走馬讀人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:30:08

• 既然你問，我就實話實說。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (721 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:30:11

• Very good suggestion. I did not write in volumes nor i read adeq -走馬讀人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:54:27

• btw, I used to mistake 聚曦 as 聚嘯 :) -走馬讀人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:20:30

• 這使我想起了霍金的詩Howling ：( 開個玩笑！ -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:29:09

• mistake sb/sth for -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:30:16

• Very good. -走馬讀人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:52:54