縱然平行2006-09-27 17:03:59回複悄悄話
落花飄零: You were kidding us , right ? In my thought you could do much better than this one which included punctuations and title was less than 60 characters. I know that number of words alone does not tell the whole story. In many case less can be better. However, based upon the context I read I am not fully convinced that this piece was geared well for a special anniversary that marked a turning point in your life ?
Have ER's dramas, demanding pts and ferocious competitions numbed your a "has- been" sentimental, brave and enthusiastic mind ?
Have ER's dramas, demanding pts and ferocious competitions numbed your a "has- been" sentimental, brave and enthusiastic mind ?