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(2008-12-27 16:59:44) 下一個
(1) The Best Gym Ever
Thurs. Dec. 11, 2008
 
             ...We were playing ‘In The Freezer’, and I teamed with Mrs. Dutton. We scored a few balls together. 
             Mrs. Dutton shot a few, they blocked them, so they were off balance, and at that time I shot a few in. Sometimes it worked, sometimes it didn’t.
             And in the end, I was in a good mood.
             I got to team by asking: “Mrs. Dutton, can we team?” She answered yes, and then she asked what the plan was, as I had told her. I said, “You distract them, and I’ll get them in.”
              At first… “Look! A snowball!” she called, throwing a fleece ball in the air.
              And I said, “No! You make a threat that it’s gonna go in, and then I throw them in.” She and I tag teamed and got a few in. Then, time was up! We lined up and left gym, our special. 

(2) On A Safari
Unknown date, 2007 
          
            I was in the Grand Canyon taking a tour around. There were sloping places and ‘Slope’ signs. I saw a nice river. It had nice path.
           When we got to the end, we saw an opening and entered. There were rocks and water.
           We then headed up. We had come here after a camping trip. We saw some nice things. There were good scenes you could stare at for an hour just observing. 
           At the beginning and the end I was fighting over a light, but my sister found it on the car. I know I could have had a better time. Oh well.

他書裏麵的順序一樣。

(3) An Agreeable Christmas
Tues. Dec. 16, 2008 
             
              We were home decorating the Christmas tree. I gave my sister the ornaments, she put them on. It was night already. * * * * * * * * * *
              Later, I thought I could keep some tinsel. She meant I could play with it. Then I had to read thirteen pages of 《 三字經》 three times. But later I had another problem with my sister and had to read it four times. Then after I was done, I came to write in this notebook, History. I wrote ‘The Best Gym Ever, #1, and this.
              This is an agreeable Christmas. Yay! Now the end. Fine. (Oh, and by the way, I created this notebook today, December 16th.)

(4) Christmas-The Best Time of the Year
Christmas, 2008

                At home my thoughts are bouncing around in my head. Christmas has been great.

        *Picture of sunrise* Morning
          It’s morning, and when we open our things, all I got was a hat and candy. “Boring!”
        “Dad, why do I have to get nothing but candy?”
        “Deal with it.”
          Come on , I thought. “But dad!”
         “Deal with it.” he repeated.
          I went upstairs to my parent’s bed after talking some. Then I talked with my mom for sometime.
           *Picture of sun* Day
         I played around sometime; then I had dinner.
        *Picture of sunset and rising moon*Afternoon
        I played some more I watched the Suite Life of Zack and Cody on TV.
       *Picture of moon*Night I came to write all this. Wait… Why am I thinking of synonyms and antonyms? Hah. This is fun. Wow… One moment the computer’s on, and the next it’s off. The TV was turned back to the position it usually is in. Maybe I’ll watch some more tomorrow. Bye!
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裘教 回複 悄悄話 回複泉水的評論:
其實這小子最不喜歡做的事就是寫作。可是好奇心重,這不,俺就在俺的博克裏給他下了個套。寫著寫著,還以為自己真的成了作家,天天嚷嚷著要在俺這發文章。這小子上了套還渾然不覺呢。

回複breezebrook的評論:
你可都看見了,俺可沒逼他哈。他自己上的鉤,這可怨不得俺。:)
泉水 回複 悄悄話 鼓勵鼓勵!有其父必有其子也,讚一個。
breezebrook 回複 悄悄話 回複裘教的評論:
這不就對了嗎。這就是厚積薄發,可見小裘民還是很用功滴。那也難怪, 有個“法西斯”老爸嘛。
裘教 回複 悄悄話 俺可是一個字都沒改。他也不讓俺改。寫東西,可不是俺布置的,他要寫俺不是也沒辦法嗎?
breezebrook 回複 悄悄話 嗯, 這文筆不象是出自一個成天忙著唱歌, 跳舞, 做遊戲的7歲小裘民之手, 說明什麽問題呢?詳情請見回憶

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