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本帖於 2025-05-16 21:49:03 時間, 由普通用戶 godog 編輯

In life nothing is more lovely than the coming-together of two people and the growing-up of their love with time, from a passionate acorn to a big rooted tree.

 

Every childhood has a garden, a charming place, where colors are brighter and air is milder, and where it's more aromatic in the morning than in any other time.

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Love both of your translation! 結構好&great word choices -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (83 bytes) () 05/16/2025 postreply 13:39:12

修改了,謝謝指正,原文更簡潔生動 -godog- 給 godog 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 05/16/2025 postreply 21:50:37

是的,the air softer,簡潔,我也喜歡:) -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 05/16/2025 postreply 21:54:30

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