祝賀你進步很大!我的一點商榷

祝賀你進步很大!我的一點商榷

Things conceiled gradually get clear
Thousands of words turn into silence
Love is a superstition with right time and right place
Oh, so you are here too
該隱瞞的事總清晰, 千言萬語隻能無語
愛是天時地利的迷信, 喔 原來你也在這裏

My  version:

The concealed things’always gradually become clear

Thousands of words only turm into silence

Love is a superstition in the right place at the right time

Oh,so you are here,too.

 

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• 謝謝武都，你的版本更加精確的表達了原文的意思和語氣,非常感謝。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (483 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 11:00:28

• 這裏加comma before the word “too” ,是為了加強語氣嗎？）,你是對的. -武都水壩- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 11:23:37

• 這裏加comma before the word “too” ,是為了加強語氣嗎？）你是對的. -武都水壩- ♀ (83 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 11:25:04

• 謝謝。仔細想想 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (114 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 11:54:05