祝賀你進步很大!我的一點商榷

祝賀你進步很大!我的一點商榷

Things conceiled gradually get clear
Thousands of words turn into silence
Love is a superstition with right time and right place
Oh, so you are here too
該隱瞞的事總清晰, 千言萬語隻能無語
愛是天時地利的迷信, 喔 原來你也在這裏

My  version:

The concealed things’always gradually become clear

Thousands of words only turm into silence

Love is a superstition in the right place at the right time

Oh,so you are here,too.