非常感謝。
The concealed things’always gradually become clear
( “become”is better than “get”. "always" 反應了原文的意思。thanks)
Thousands of words only turm into silence
("only" should be in here to mean "隻(能)"。 thanks)
Love is a superstition in the right place at the right time
(thanks,翻這句我當時想了好一會兒,不知道怎麽更好的把superstition和place+time連在一起。)
Oh,so you are here,too.
(這裏加comma before the word “too” ,是為了加強語氣嗎?)
謝謝武都,你的版本更加精確的表達了原文的意思和語氣,非常感謝。
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                    這裏加comma before the word “too” ,是為了加強語氣嗎?),你是對的.
                     -武都水壩- 
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                    這裏加comma before the word “too” ,是為了加強語氣嗎?)你是對的.
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                    謝謝。仔細想想
                     -戲雨飛鷹- 
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