明天是端午節，想起了小時候我老爸包的紫沙粽。

白米紅棗紫沙粽
包進千年追思情
蘆葦翻浪離騷曲
糯葉流香五月風

In the rice, red dates and purple beans,
the millennium memory is wrapped
Accompanied with Li-Sao reeds wave
In May wind wafts the scent of reed leaves

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• my understanding: -help15- ♀ (227 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 10:52:05

• thank you, help. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (202 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:01:05

• thank you . -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:08:12

• but why do you make inversion? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:12:31

• 為了有點rhythm，盡量上口。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:17:26

• 雙語好詩，精彩。戲雨飛鷹，給你和大家送粽子來了： -紫君- ♀ (3207 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:15:47

• 太美了，太饞人了。音樂更讓我想中國老家了。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:23:58

• Today my acct increased >$1000 -走馬讀人- ♂ (393 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:23:38

• oh, my goodness.., old horse, -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (81 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:28:41

• 狗尾续貂.... :( -走馬讀人- ♂ (136 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:31:27

• english version please? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:33:24

• 诗囊 -走馬讀人- ♂ (830 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:45:52

• sorry, i meant the English version translated from your orignal -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:59:07

• 大師, 你取的這些諧音字多有詩意啊，真的是佩服！ -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:35:13

• ***********:))) -走馬讀人- ♂ (102 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:39:55

• 老馬的version正是我的心語。謝謝horse大師。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (116 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:46:04

• Excellent poem! -美壇奇葩- ♂ (24 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:57:50

• newbie大師，你去哪裏修煉了？好久不見。我也很想吃粽子。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (36 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:07:52

• 回複： -美壇奇葩- ♂ (468 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:38:45

• well written and great suggestion. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (200 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:43:41

• sweetie, this is a very fine piece -bearsback- ♂ (227 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:47:32

• the w words: with, wrap, wind and waft are 韻? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:53:58

• 頭韻 -bearsback- ♂ (33 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:09:43

• 你這是廣義的頭暈：）。嚴格來講， -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (374 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:25:29

• yes I agree -bearsback- ♂ (119 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 14:57:00

• 回複：yes I agree -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (197 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:30:18

• 不管room多大 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:31:53

• you are right. yes you are -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 16:26:34

• thanks。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (93 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:19:17

• 哈哈哈 I was replying to your first paragraph -bearsback- ♂ (31 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:42:06

• i knew it ( for 1st part). i was teasing you:):) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:48:09

• 距離太遠的偷越， -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (26 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:38:40

• I agree. The closer the better -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 14:58:42

• 回複：I agree. The closer the better -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (76 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:16:37

• what? -bearsback- ♂ (120 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 16:25:44

• thanks -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (211 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:44:36

• 還是自由體舒服。 -bearsback- ♂ (19 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:29:37

• ：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (52 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:04:42

• or, just a quote, i just found it -bearsback- ♂ (249 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 20:55:06

• 你不說我都不知道 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (90 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:31:39

• Based on your work ... -美壇奇葩- ♂ (454 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:03:04

• hmm，你的version我非常喜歡。也很邏輯。help看後肯定不會 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (34 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:12:49

• laugh at me? haha. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:22:09

• so頭韻是相同的字母,尾韻是末尾的字母 ? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:27:51

• 回複：so頭韻是相同的字母,字母 ? -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (52 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:35:33

• 頭韻是開頭是相同的字母 or the same consonant? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:40:46

• consonant -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:44:26

• leaves, dates. melodies have no韻? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:49:01

• listen, 我很喜歡bear說的the lines： -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (139 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:50:42

• last question: when you turn a piece of writing into poem -help15- ♀ (73 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 14:09:12

• 其實，我一般就是直接寫出來， -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (257 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:05:09

• "束縛住', not "舒服出" -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:09:42

• no. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:51:49

• like it.: leaves, dates; month, melodies. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:20:59

• Thank you! -美壇奇葩- ♂ (19 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:48:13

• Why would I catch mice when I have fish? -美壇奇葩- ♂ (34 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:25:01

• hahaha, xiexie:). i like yours -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:26:43

• 好詩，下班前和飛鷹mm一首 -lilac09- ♀ (254 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:48:24

• Excellent poem! -美壇奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:50:54

• 謝花美美同學~:） -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:19:16

• 這絕句的太美了。我都讀不夠。欣賞。：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:55:42

• 你的有曆史有追思有人情，寫的好, 同欣賞。：） -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:17:51

• 我過兩天要很忙。有時間跟你一起學英語。你英語好。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:06:15

• 城裏姓紫的真多。 詩潭有紫色王家。這裏又好幾個 -bearsback- ♂ (38 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 21:08:53

• 很棒很棒 -板板- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:08:31

• 謝謝，向板板學習：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:52:50

• all are great. -deepwoods- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:41:34

• thanks,說的太對了，從老馬的２pieces到奇葩的piece和建議，到裏拉的５絕和紫君的美粽，都是精品。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (139 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:01:48

• your is excellent. -deepwoods- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:11:06

• 謝大俠！ -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (112 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:42:00

• i am nobody, hehe. -deepwoods- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:46:32

• 鷹妹，我說你可能不信 -bearsback- ♂ (54 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 22:08:19

• 粽子沒啥好吃的。but -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (69 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 06:46:38

• I did not know that -bearsback- ♂ (28 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 10:24:01

• 雙語翻譯：haha -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (197 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 07:01:18

• haha great. 你也變小偷了？哈哈 I love the author's name -bearsback- ♂ (53 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 10:07:22

• oops 心上人 -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 10:09:24