請幫忙潤色一封推薦信

俺娃的鋼琴老師是一位瘦小的年輕人。雖然年輕但學究氣的很，一絲不苟的，我們對他還算滿意，他和我娃也對眼。他在找工作，請我寫封推薦信。找我的原因可能是逢年過節我都會送他一個gift bag，裏麵必定有一張thanks card，洋洋灑灑寫上一些好話。靠教琴為生不容易，我是真心想幫這孩子一把。

我網上看了幾個sample，湊了這篇。我寫東西一向四平八穩，毫無文采。請大家幫忙再潤色一下，看著再文化一點，讀著再拽一點。謝謝！

To Whom It May Concern,

This letter is to serve as our formal recommendation for Ben Smith. We have had the distinct pleasure of having Ben as the piano instructor for our son Jerry for a year. We found him to be extremely competent and always pleasant.

There are many competent piano instructors available; what sets Ben apart is his attitude toward music and his students. We could tell from our initial acquaintance that Ben has an intrinsic love of playing the piano. He constantly looks for opportunities to enhance and enrich himself. His passion for music is expressed in his teaching. He sets higher standards for his students and inspires them to achieve more. The reason he is able to successfully do so is he takes the time and thought to understand each of his students.

Using our son Jerry as an example, Ben always pushes Jerry to somewhere near his limit, in regard to attention and ability. He understands Jerry's potential and limitations, and he carefully adapts his teaching style to maximize this potential. It is like squeezing a sponge: he squeezes most of it, but leaves just enough to prevent the student from drying out.

Ben communicates well with his students. He encourages students' equality and initiation in the learning process. He keeps them focused, keeps them interested, and keeps them coming back and wanting more.

Ben also impressed us by his ability to maximize the use of his teaching time. There isn't a minute that goes to waste. He always knows what was reviewed in the last lesson and what needs to be accomplished in the current lesson. In other words, he diligently keeps track of his students' weekly progress.

Under Ben's supervision, Jerry had been improving steadily, and the best thing is that Jerry has never found playing piano boring under Ben's instruction.

We sincerely recommend Ben for this position. If you have any questions regarding Ben or this recommendation, please don't hesitant to contact us.

Sincerely yours,

Geo

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• 四平八穩 is a merit lots of people lack. -濤如雲海- ♂ (455 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 17:12:19

• 謝謝，我再琢磨琢磨。 -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 17:19:47

• Excellent writing! May need a little tweak. -lilac09- ♀ (860 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 18:26:36

• 回複：Excellent writing! May need a little tweak. -selfselfself- ♂ (136 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 19:41:02

• 問俺偶拜8妹傅好。就是俺當偶像崇拜的88queen她妹的師傅的簡稱。 -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:24:09

• 您好，看看我能給你一點建議不？ -selfselfself- ♂ (1658 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:53:19

• 多謝8妹傅! 我下去細嚼嚼。 -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:01:05

• goo了一下,老外也有問的,答案是兩者都通用,您扣的很細法呀~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:51:06

• 沒辦法，工作中a, an, the, 時態和單複數老被挑刺 -selfselfself- ♂ (24 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:58:33

• 啥工種呀，a，an，the的這麽較汁,給國會起草議案的俺搞不懂 -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:02:36

• 88 queen 來了，多謝指正。. -geopolitics- ♀ (333 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:20:47

• I would say, "please don't HESITATE":) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (76 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:27:40

• 那大拿就是你了：） -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:29:16

• hehehe,其實我的英語是整個壇子裏最差的.所以,我才來這裏玩英語。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:34:00

• 瞎謙虛啥呀，熊老第一個跳掌反對~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:54:37

• 不是謙虛。是今天終於鼓足勇氣說了實話：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:32:14

• oops, "an" adjective -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:29:17

• geo姐，客氣啥呀，互相討論，挑刺永遠比長刺容易~ -lilac09- ♀ (195 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:47:29

• 這一聲姐叫的，姐想不老都難啊。I did make a careless mistake. Thanks again for y -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:54:32

• for your excellent input. -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:55:08

• geo妹見諒，俺現在都爭當姐，當姐牛呀：）~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:57:29

• 應該還是 Queen 牛吧？ :-) -selfselfself- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:59:22

• Dollar Queen才牛，大侃Queen實在是..唉~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:08:11

• Sis晚上好，祝你新的一周快樂，永遠如春天般的燦爛亮麗。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:40:07

• 上個PP，謝謝大家。 (圖) -geopolitics- ♀ (69 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:07:48

• wow，大美女呀，皮膚真好~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:10:34

• 奔的牛！妹妹漂亮！ -濤如雲海- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:12:38

• 謝謝二位，我是每次貼了PP就後悔。 -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:19:12

• 理解,理解，後悔沒早貼! :) -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:23:20

• 是後悔不該貼：） -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:25:41

• 嗯，是後悔不該貼了攪得人難以入睡，心不落忍--多善良的妹子 -濤如雲海- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:56:11

• 美女！！ -selfselfself- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:19:40

• 以後朗讀可有動力了,geo美眉最愛聽self哥哥朗讀了,多讀多答疑哈:O~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:26:57

• 我今天開始學習朗讀，終於有MOTIVE了 -ryu,- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:35:12

• 那就快點。等不急了。你的朗讀是我們上網的動力，haha -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:58:17

• 您的玉照,甭管多大的眼鏡都是俺上網的動力,俺可不會嘰嘰歪歪的~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 22:27:32

• 我今天豁出去了。把600度的眼鏡也摘掉 (圖) -ryu,- ♂ (69 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 22:37:58

• 向貼美女照的姐們提個意見:能不能把SUN GLASSES摘掉或帶小點的 -ryu,- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:25:03

• 存下來，做REVERSE ENG看能不能複原幫你把眼鏡摘掉 -ryu,- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:27:44

• haha， 你這人，咋想的？動心了吧？:):) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:30:56

• 哈哈 是動腦了。好奇心害死貓 HA -ryu,- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:33:45

• 我今晚上才真正意識到： -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (62 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:38:51

• 美女！美女！！ -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:26:02

• geopolitics，優雅美麗，頗有氣質。 -婉蕠- ♀ (1232 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:35:20

• 謝謝婉MM和樓上各位，這種粉飾太平的PP是不能信滴。 -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:39:33

• two suggestions -yingshanhong- ♀ (351 bytes) () 03/22/2010 postreply 14:32:49

• Thanks for the valuable input. -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/22/2010 postreply 20:45:43