Excellent writing! May need a little tweak.

If I am wrong, just kick it aside. :)

what sets Ben apart is his attitude toward music and his students.
>>sets ***** apart 分開放, 隔離開
stand out : 突出; 顯眼, 超群
what makes Ben stand out is ....

We could tell from our initial acquaintance that Ben has an intrinsic love of playing the piano. (sounds a little awkward to me)
>>In the very first time we met Ben, he struck us favourably as a spirited young man who loves playing the piano from the bottom of his heart.

He encourages students' equality and initiation in the learning process.
>> He treats his students equally and encourages their own initiative in the learning process
initiation: 發起, 創始
initiative: 主動性, 首創精神

please don't hesitant to contact us. (minor grammar mistake)
>> please don't be hesitant to contact us.

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• 回複：Excellent writing! May need a little tweak. -selfselfself- ♂ (136 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 19:41:02

• 問俺偶拜8妹傅好。就是俺當偶像崇拜的88queen她妹的師傅的簡稱。 -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:24:09

• 您好，看看我能給你一點建議不？ -selfselfself- ♂ (1658 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:53:19

• 多謝8妹傅! 我下去細嚼嚼。 -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:01:05

• goo了一下,老外也有問的,答案是兩者都通用,您扣的很細法呀~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:51:06

• 沒辦法，工作中a, an, the, 時態和單複數老被挑刺 -selfselfself- ♂ (24 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:58:33

• 啥工種呀，a，an，the的這麽較汁,給國會起草議案的俺搞不懂 -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:02:36

• 88 queen 來了，多謝指正。. -geopolitics- ♀ (333 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:20:47

• I would say, "please don't HESITATE":) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (76 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:27:40

• 那大拿就是你了：） -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:29:16

• hehehe,其實我的英語是整個壇子裏最差的.所以,我才來這裏玩英語。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:34:00

• 瞎謙虛啥呀，熊老第一個跳掌反對~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:54:37

• 不是謙虛。是今天終於鼓足勇氣說了實話：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:32:14

• oops, "an" adjective -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:29:17

• geo姐，客氣啥呀，互相討論，挑刺永遠比長刺容易~ -lilac09- ♀ (195 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:47:29

• 這一聲姐叫的，姐想不老都難啊。I did make a careless mistake. Thanks again for y -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:54:32

• for your excellent input. -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:55:08

• geo妹見諒，俺現在都爭當姐，當姐牛呀：）~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:57:29

• 應該還是 Queen 牛吧？ :-) -selfselfself- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:59:22

• Dollar Queen才牛，大侃Queen實在是..唉~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:08:11

• Sis晚上好，祝你新的一周快樂，永遠如春天般的燦爛亮麗。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:40:07