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草草為之，應該還有很多地方要refine.
We have met and used a few piano instructors. What sets Ben apart is his attitude toward his students and his approach to music. We could tell from our initial acquaintance that Ben has an intrinsic love for playing piano. He constantly looks for opportunities to enhance and enrich himself. His passion for music is expressed in his teaching. He sets higher standards for his students and inspires them to achieve more. He is able to successfully do so because he takes time and thought to understand each of his students.

Using our son Jerry as an example, Ben understands Jerry's potential and limitation. He carefully adapts his teaching style to enhance Jerry’s capability. Ben always encourages Jerry to break through his own limit, to improve his skill and attention to music.

Ben communicates well with his students.（第一句似乎和整段的意思不太契合） He focuses on bringing out the initiatives from the students in the learning process. He keeps them focused and keeps their interests high. This ensures the students keep going back to Ben and wanting more.

Ben also impressed us with his effective use of the teaching time. There isn't a minute that goes to waste. He always knows what was taught in the last lesson and what needs to be accomplished in the current lesson. In other words, he diligently keeps track of his students' weekly progress.（這一句似乎和整段的意思也不太契合）

Under Ben's supervision, Jerry has been improving steadily through out the past year. The best thing is that Jerry has never found playing piano boring with Ben's instruction.

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