請幫忙潤色一封推薦信

俺娃的鋼琴老師是一位瘦小的年輕人。雖然年輕但學究氣的很，一絲不苟的，我們對他還算滿意，他和我娃也對眼。他在找工作，請我寫封推薦信。找我的原因可能是逢年過節我都會送他一個gift bag，裏麵必定有一張thanks card，洋洋灑灑寫上一些好話。靠教琴為生不容易，我是真心想幫這孩子一把。

我網上看了幾個sample，湊了這篇。我寫東西一向四平八穩，毫無文采。請大家幫忙再潤色一下，看著再文化一點，讀著再拽一點。謝謝！

To Whom It May Concern,

This letter is to serve as our formal recommendation for Ben Smith. We have had the distinct pleasure of having Ben as the piano instructor for our son Jerry for a year. We found him to be extremely competent and always pleasant.

There are many competent piano instructors available; what sets Ben apart is his attitude toward music and his students. We could tell from our initial acquaintance that Ben has an intrinsic love of playing the piano. He constantly looks for opportunities to enhance and enrich himself. His passion for music is expressed in his teaching. He sets higher standards for his students and inspires them to achieve more. The reason he is able to successfully do so is he takes the time and thought to understand each of his students.

Using our son Jerry as an example, Ben always pushes Jerry to somewhere near his limit, in regard to attention and ability. He understands Jerry's potential and limitations, and he carefully adapts his teaching style to maximize this potential. It is like squeezing a sponge: he squeezes most of it, but leaves just enough to prevent the student from drying out.

Ben communicates well with his students. He encourages students' equality and initiation in the learning process. He keeps them focused, keeps them interested, and keeps them coming back and wanting more.

Ben also impressed us by his ability to maximize the use of his teaching time. There isn't a minute that goes to waste. He always knows what was reviewed in the last lesson and what needs to be accomplished in the current lesson. In other words, he diligently keeps track of his students' weekly progress.

Under Ben's supervision, Jerry had been improving steadily, and the best thing is that Jerry has never found playing piano boring under Ben's instruction.

We sincerely recommend Ben for this position. If you have any questions regarding Ben or this recommendation, please don't hesitant to contact us.

Sincerely yours,

Geo