請海外逸士評評這個譯文，謝！

 

暫時命之 《無題》，評評中英互譯得如何？

美妙的時光 /  就從現在起 / 人生過程中  / 總會有神奇 / 改變了一切

Tale as old as time
True as it can be
Barely even friends
Then somebody bends
Unexpectedly

在那無意間  / 愛神走近你 / 沒人能預知  / 未來的世界 /  美女與野獸

Just a little change
Small, to say the least
Both a little scared
Neither one prepared
Beauty and the Beast

放開你胸懷 / 把握住現在 / 讓所有夢想 / 燃起生命中 / 亮麗的色彩

Ever just the same
Ever a surprise
Ever as before
Ever just as sure
As the sun will rise

放開你胸懷 / 把握住現在 / 讓所有夢想 /  燃起生命中 /  亮麗的色彩

Tale as old as time
Tune as old as song
Bittersweet and strange
Finding you can change
Learning you were wrong

清歌曼舞中 / 愛茁壯成長 / 讓所有祝福 / 圍繞你們倆 /  美女與野獸

Certain as the sun
Rising in the east
Tale as old as time
Song as old as rhyme
Beauty and the beast.

 

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 有意思。有兩句中文重複了，能改下嗎？我也想試著翻譯下。:) -doyouknowme- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 14:16:19

• 我的翻譯，很搞笑的；沒翻重複的那兩句哈 -doyouknowme- ♀ (943 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 14:44:22

• 棒! 告你個秘密 -李唐- ♂ (12 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 19:29:28

• 哈，真壞呀！:D -doyouknowme- ♀ (66 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 20:22:59

• 很搞笑的，我笑了半天了！ -李唐- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 19:31:08

• 哼哼，當心笑岔了氣哈！嗬嗬 -doyouknowme- ♀ (239 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 20:29:09

• 山大同學語錄：語言為人民服務。所以，信達雅的理論不是僵死的教條。 -李唐- ♂ (216 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 05:49:33

• 為什麼基本對不上號﹖是算翻譯嗎﹖ -海外逸士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 15:37:35

• 以您當今活的中國人的中英文水平沒有出你左右的水平 -李唐- ♂ (31 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 18:16:01