sorry, two typos.

Suject line ==> mean to write "like doing"

Body ==> mean to write "hasn't"

I don't know when I could completely get rid of typos and errors. But thank you so much for pointing out my errors. Thoughts on other aspects of the story such as story-flow, logic, ambiguity etc are also welcome.

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• Shark，你客氣了，那我就不客氣了哈 -非文學青年- ♀ (1781 bytes) () 05/06/2012 postreply 22:34:10

• About event sequence -Hammerheadshark- ♀ (1198 bytes) () 05/07/2012 postreply 04:18:42

• yeah, Italics will work. -非文學青年- ♀ (464 bytes) () 05/07/2012 postreply 06:50:03