sorry, two typos.

來源: 2012-05-06 18:38:46 [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀:

Suject line ==> mean to write "like doing"

Body ==> mean to write "hasn't"

I don't know when I could completely get rid of typos and errors. But thank you so much for pointing out my errors. Thoughts on other aspects of the story such as story-flow, logic, ambiguity etc are also welcome.