I happed to see the sentence you just deleted. I like that one b

Because I would like to avoid unnecessary repeated word.

Was this the sentence you just deleted？

A locomotive has to be added fuel, such as coal, firewood, or other flammable substance, which is to be consumed to provide motion or energy for the machine.

All of the other suggestions are excellent!!!

 

 

 

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• 回複：I happed to see the sentence you just deleted. I like that on -EnLearner- ♀ (444 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 22:38:17

• 統統都是可燃的東西。文青用了consumption of which. -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:00:59

• 文教授請再看一下這條。 -EnLearner- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:05:25

• 愚教授說得非常對！這裏最好不用從句。 -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:10:07

• 問題是從語言的角度，which指代那個名詞？ -EnLearner- ♀ (75 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:15:25

• 謝謝愚教授精益求精，同意，這裏不用從句了！newton用了不定式，沒有用從句，他的表達對嗎？ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:20:54

• 我看錯了，newton也用了單句，沒用從句。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:25:37

• TA好象漏翻了一句。 -EnLearner- ♀ (795 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:30:35

• 我看了原文，原文用的從句。 the consumption of which...文青大師說對了！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:40:14

• 是從句。假教授隻能說：因為這裏指代fuel比較明顯，所以不嚴謹也就不嚴謹了。金耳朵說對了！ -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:43:06

• Why? -EnLearner- ♀ (175 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:47:45

• 恩，我的理解是such as... 也是修飾noun1的， 和which從句並列。 -非文學青年- ♀ (74 bytes) () 08/11/2011 postreply 00:10:41

• Thanks. Now it makes more sense to me. -EnLearner- ♀ (184 bytes) () 08/11/2011 postreply 07:23:58

• 應該是指代immediately proceeding的名詞。在這裏用從句不嚴謹。 -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:21:06

• Thank you, Prof. Wen. -EnLearner- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:31:17