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兒子的小說 - 螞蟻曆險記(1,2)

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   兒子安平時喜歡和姐姐玩編故事的遊戲,他喜歡編傳奇故事,自己做主角,主角常常惹麻煩,出問題,幽默搞笑。最近他迷上了威廉螞蟻曆險記的故事,我和霏聽了,感覺很有趣,兩周前我為他買了本筆記本,讓他將故事寫下來,他很快就寫下了前三個章節,邊寫邊笑,很享受編寫小說的過程。

    上周的一天他在我博客上看到姐姐過去的文章,於是拿出他的筆記本,認真地叮囑我,也要我將他的小說打進我的博客裏,但我一直沒有空兒去做。

    今夜兩個孩子已熟睡,我在燈下打入安小說的前兩章節,明天早上起來想象著他的大驚喜(big pleasant surprise)

    第一,二章節的故事梗概大致是:威廉螞蟻去學校,午餐時貪食,去吃垃圾桶裏的食物,沒想到,他隨垃圾車被倒進一個大垃圾場,他喊救命,但沒有人能幫助他。為躲蒼蠅,威廉爬出垃圾堆到樹林裏,林子裏有個食蟻動物,盡管食蟻動物旁邊有許多麵包屑,他沒敢去吃,又看到蜘蛛,為了避免被逮,他跑出了食蟻動物和蜘蛛的領地,恰好看到一個滑板架,他想坐滑板架回家,可是他分不清方向,因為已經失蹤了,他隻好選了一個方向,試圖離開林子。

 

The Adventures of William 威廉螞蟻曆險記

作者:畢安(7歲)

 

William is an ant that sometimes gets in trouble and his owner's name is Joey. He does have a sister and her name is Ashlyn. Her owner's name is Rachel. She plays with him and is older. Ashlyn is nine and william is seven and they love crumbs. But they have a lot of differences. Here is one, William has a sweet tooth and Ashlyn doesn't. He will have lots of fun in this story.

 

Chaper One: William Gets in the Trash Can 第一章節:威廉進了垃圾桶

It was a school day so william went to school. He learned about stuff and had fun. Then it was lunch time. He started eating and then he saw another ant eating from the trash can. William then said: "Maybe I should try doing that." Then he did. He ate and ate until he was full. Then the trash can started moving and it went to the dump truck. The dump truck then put him in the dumps. William called out for help but no one heard him. Then he yelled, cried, whined and screamed, but there was no one to help.

 

Chapter Two: William Is Lost 第二章節:威廉失蹤了

The flies came, and they were eating stuff from the dumps. So William got out and entered the woods. After he entered it, he had spotted an anteater. William was really scared. Then he saw crumbs near it and they look so tempting, but he knew that he could not eat it unless he wanted to be eaten by the anteater, so he quietly ran away. He went and went until he saw a spider. This time he knew he could get out of seeing anteaters or spiders, so he ran out and the next thing he saw was a skateboard. He thought he could use it to get out of trouble and to find his family, but he did not know which way to go and how to get out of the woods, so he just picked one way then another, so he was lost.

 

(To Be Continued -待續中)

(插圖來自網絡,謝謝作者)

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