故 宮

故  宮

 

額娘讓少年皇帝

打開宮裏最大的窗

從東華門望去

所有的眼睛都閉著　

金橋之水近衛午門

路朝四麵八方

 

那天陽光不錯

如果奏折沒有敵人的消息

主子也許會猛回頭

太和殿的金碧籠罩一隊

班師潰爛的旗兵

 

今天陽光也不錯　

天安門西的半個蛋

用法蘭西勾兌的精子

在試管裏卵生

鼓瑟齊鳴的養心殿

九隻黃鸝參加了

費加羅小生和花旦的婚禮

我也該坐念唱打點什麽

-----(京胡過門)

最後的景山

槐樹間掛著一棵勇敢的心　

 

 

:<猛回頭> 近代革命家陳天華所著.

:由法國建築師保羅.安得魯設計,在建的像半個蛋的國家大劇院.

:景山即煤山,明朝崇禎皇帝在此上吊身亡.

[律周]

對曆史的理解往往從現實而來。
謝謝你的參與。

[地中海人魚]

speaking of "qing", ok, by the way, I would say in Qing dynasty, the history in China was moving backwards. Schade...

I can see time is crossing in this poem.

I think, YY means "brave" does not have a synergy here, at least I feel so.

[律周]

我也該坐念唱打點什麽

-----(京胡過門)

最後的景山

槐樹間掛著一棵心　??

[影雲]

indeed i am not talking about HIM, but the line, which can be more vivid and touching :) when it's abstract, [ and not earthy ] sometimes, it's hard to be felt .:)

[律周]

我覺得他是個悲劇人物,國亡即身亡,也算條漢子.

[影雲]

that story, i know, but i was saying about the word "勇敢" :)

[律周]

明朝崇禎皇帝在景山一棵槐樹下上吊而亡.

[影雲]

like these lines, however, 勇敢 is a little bit abstract or cliche :)

-----(京胡過門)

最後的景山

槐樹間掛著一棵勇敢的心